i LIKE IT

another of your lovely stories...and again I love it

I like your style of writing dear. It's a great story, promise!

Interesting little piece. This isn't bad, but it is a bit too obscure in places. Thanks for sharing.

I normally don't read this pairing, but it was recommended--and rightly so. This was absolutely lovely--very well-written, with perfect characterizations of Sasuke and Sakura. Wonderful job!

With each one, I found myself feeling like there was something missing, yet... if you added anything on, it wouldn't be so perfect, it wouldn't be possibly real

I adore the way you wrote it really, capturing and conveying so much emotion within such little space, you're a wonderful writer with a style that I haven't seen around for a while, it's wonderful to see work like this ^_^ specially for sasusaku

Keep up the great work!

~_Hersheys_~

Simply beautiful. You've picked such an awesome pairing to write about!

That was really cute! I really did like it!

This is a good ficlet

This was a lovely one-shot! Everyone was in character, which was great. And oh gosh, I just loved the way you portrayed Sasuke. That little sardonic, evil kind of way haha. Usually it's impossible for people to capture that but you did it perfectly! And I liked the fact that Sakura wasn't all -SASUKE! I LOVE YOU! COME HAVE MY BABIES!- lol. Although she was a bit weak, she still came out more on the substantial side. But I did have some confusion while reading [I'm not sure, maybe I'm just really slow o_O]. Like in the first vignette, why did Sasuke lie about hurting Naruto? And also, in the third vignette, did Sasuke&Sakura ya know.. converge in sexual interactions? 'Cuz he said he had more than one goal and the only other goal I remember is him restoring his clan. Sorry if my questions sounded idiotic xD. Anywho, this story was written wonderfully! And I hope you know, you are very talented :D.

i like this.. very nice piece! byby~yu~

my favorite is four, but one and two are okay, but i don't like three because sasuke is way too evil lol, but overall this is realy good

God, to be honest, THIS WAS A WIN. Everyone was so in character -- and I loved how Sakura had that thing called inner strength; not a lot of people put it in their stories.

You are so underappreciated that it's almost sickening.

very good

Nicely done. Great job.