The ending was amazing.
It made me shiver.

Your stories are amazing as always.
:]

Aww this is so sad and angsty. But make sure not to make too many typos.

T_T

Okay, dude, you have officially made this angst whore go all emo in her corner after reading this; it's THAT well done when it comes down to your angst, which is awesome and sad and angsty. Not overly emo or, um, cliched in the least.

It's actually quite pretty when you REALLY look at it, really. I love the style deeply, especially the way you work the names in; the ending, in particular, is quite brilliant. (I royally agree with what warm.summer.nights stated on the "The days are black, and the nights are ebony.", it's funky and stylistic and YOU and I love how you twist cliche into making it your own; your word use is impeccable in things like this. Also, while it takes a bit of time to get used to, it's still a very well done sentence and one that absolutely OWNED MY HEART AFTERWARDS. ♥)

So, yeah, I must be ranting--I had coffee! 'cause, um, first day of school and all...--but you love my ranting because it is glittery and shiny and filled with positive things like skyscrapers and your pretty little prose. ^__^

Oh, and, yeah--we all do love a little angst (and some more than others)! What's not to love? ~_^

- Pixie

:(

that was really sad. like, really.

i loved the name effect in between every couple of sentences. it was really nice, and added to the emotion of it all.

a few (and when i say few i mean very few) funky errors, but overall, beautiful writing. nice style. especially when you say things like, "The days are black, and the nights are ebony." instead of something like 'the days are dark and the nights are darker." i really liked the way you put that. very descriptive throughout.

mkay enough rambling.

sora! i feel so bad for him. but it was all too much for him to take, no?

and yes- we ALL love a little angst every once in a while

Holy crap that was so sad I feel sad... Great story though!

wow. o.o i'm not
much for the angsty
stuff, but this was rly
good. the ending ... ohh,
bravo. amazing. ♥
definite fav. x3

~kimberly