Reviews for Scenes from the Cullens
Emo and Moving On 10/11/07 . chapter 1
i would die if my parents ever were so weird...i'd run away too.
maddy 10/10/07 . chapter 6
wtf?
maddy 10/10/07 . chapter 4
i love charlie the unicorn!
Sorcha123 10/6/07 . chapter 4
OK, so i like the story and the random scenes and such... but i think you need to work on description. you are writhing this as if you are writing a film. you need to go more story like. try taking actions out of italics and putting spoken words in "s. then just lengthen the actions with descriptions of feelings and emotion such as;

he walked sluggishly to the door, reluctant to admit Edward.
wildfirexpassion 10/1/07 . chapter 7
Math finals…I forgot to study
SilverTwilight1810 9/30/07 . chapter 7
Oh my*god! Haha! This is funny! :) I liked this scene, its cute! Please update soon! Natalie
purtyinpink71121 9/30/07 . chapter 7
hahahaha.

When I was reading I actually thought it was Bella not wanting to go to school. "I need more time! I have to get ready" That's what I'm always like in the mornings, hehe.

So I guess I was kind of close.

Anyway, great job with this! Update soon!

-Skye
The Thrush That Can't Fly 9/30/07 . chapter 7
This is SO funny! i liked chapter 7 HATED chapter 3. BellaJacobAnguish, misery, regret, hatred, and many more/
StoriesUndone 8/27/07 . chapter 6
HAHA. nice :)
lilvoice1 8/26/07 . chapter 6
very good...but a little weird. hope you can update soon!
brittasdf 8/25/07 . chapter 5
aww poor eddie lmao
brittasdf 8/25/07 . chapter 4
hahaha charlie the unicorn!
wildfirexpassion 8/24/07 . chapter 6
Haha. I love Scene Six.

O_o
Kerri 8/24/07 . chapter 6
this is soo stupid! you can't mix Harry Potter and Twilight together! they're completely different.
edwardandbellarule888 8/24/07 . chapter 6
id like to see aro be voldemort in person! without jane of course. or any other vamps who might plan to kill me if aro asks them to... that would be so funny though!
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