That was damn disturbing, but very well written.

AHAHAHAHA brilliant!

I knew it was Slughorn the whole time because he pulled that chair thing in the beginning of HBP! good piece.

The Chokey.

Cool reference.

Very well written. Love James, but Slughorn... anyway, your a great writter

Wow - I could have imagined that coming right out of one of the books, a more mature one of course. I often check back to see if you have written anything new - you are such an exceptional writer. That was very interesting - thanks! Mels

That was incredible. I can't deny that you are very very good at writing both frightening and sensual instances. I am always blown away by your stories. This was another of your intriguing tales and I am so glad to see you writing more. I've missed reading your work.

-N. Shadow

Definitely not what I was expecting, Stef. It's incredible. Trust you to make something definitely disturbing and erotic at the same time; there is some interesting power play going on here that warrants further thought.

Also, quite hot. And very you. Thanks again, for always making me think.

only one review! for shame...

excellent, of course. I was a bit surprised to see you writing some Harry Potter, but, of course it was magnificent.

And also very, very dark. Interesting idea, though, very interesting. I think the encounter with the Fat Lady set it up quite nicely, well-done.

warm regards,
dark-hearted rose

I can't believe I'm the first to review! This is great! The idea is...ew and you did a god jope writing it so it'smore like ew...but I can't stop reading!

Neelam.