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ILikeComps
2009-11-29 . chapter 17
Good story. Although Andy and Harry have a large age gap, I would not have been opposed to some other relationship. Thanks for sharing!
Shivers Prewett
2009-11-26 . chapter 17
Hi,

Really enjoyed this story. Found it through reading the Innocence Lost and Found trilogy (which i also enjoyed and think you're quite hard on yourself in the author comments). Thanks for writing and I look forward to reading other Potterverse stories you come up with.
Also - completely understand your annoyance at JK over Tonks & Remus. And liked your portrayal or Andromeda.

Shivers
LittleLyce
2009-11-09 . chapter 17
I was going to say that I enjoyed the fact that this isnt an 'eventful' fic, until I thought back and realised that isnt true at all! I suppose what I really mean to say is that I enjoyed the fact that the events occur in order to enable character development, rather than just so that something is happening. Its a very different style to canon but it worked.

The reflections back to Andromeda's childhood were interesting and informative but seemed to sit outside of the events of this story, even considering how the vault became relevant in the end. I felt like you were trying to explore two different characters which is possible in a plot driven fic but goes against the premise of a character driven one. There ended up being two fics, spliced together but I enjoyed the quiet interplay between them enough not to mind.

I found your manner of presenting loss as a concept to be quite good. It was especially palpable in the character of George where the empty place where Fred used to be had enough presence it was almost a character in its own right. I would have liked to see more of George and a mention of his broom 'accident' wouldnt have gone astray. That was the one loose end I felt was left trailing.

Nicely done overall.
Potterworm
2009-10-25 . chapter 17
I absolutely loved this fic. Very well written.
tryingtobestine
2009-10-12 . chapter 17
I absolutely loved it.
dolphinlover101
2009-09-28 . chapter 17
This a wonderful story and I totally agree with everything written in this story
owl3764
2009-09-22 . chapter 17
Such a pleasure to read a well written (and interesting) story.
Thanks for sharing
ZenJack
2009-08-28 . chapter 17
I loved this story. It's always nice to find a good fic a from a bit in the past.
krakow
2009-08-13 . chapter 17
Thanks for a lovely story. Very interesting and convincing take on the goblins!
Ashley868
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
Loved this chapter. I just found this in one of the beyond Epilogue communities. Right now I am reading any story like this one or the next gen. So far this looks like one of the good ones. Although I do have one thing to say. I agree it's better that people don't know about the Horcruxes... they did hear about those as well as the Hallows. Harry told Voldemort that they were gone in the Great Hall. Not saying he should have said anything about them during the radio broadcast... that was definitely a good idea. I just wanted to point out that they were mentioned.
PrincessOfDrama33
2009-08-05 . chapter 2
That was a wonderful take on pureblood aristocracy. Good job!
PrincessOfDrama33
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Oh my god. Hands down, best fic that pics up right where JK left off before the epilogue! If you removed the non-anonymous review thing, you might already have PLENTY of reviews.
ProcastinationIsKey
2009-08-02 . chapter 17
Mind blowingly brilliant!
Instant fave.
Even though it sprung from hate for the Weasleys, absolutely ingenious.
of Serendip
2009-07-25 . chapter 13
First of all, I want to say I like Harry/Andromeda's relationship. I like that Harry had another place to go to other than the Weasleys and think that JKR's remark on Arthur got to live while Remus and Tonks had to go annoying, partly because it was

and you made me really dislike Hermione and Ginny in this story haha.( more than I already do in this case)

I think that if the relationship like Harry/Ginny rarely works in real life, if it does than he was a bit of a masochist who secretly like being treated poorly, she was so aggressive in nature, He might find that sort of things attractive. I also find Ginny's accusation against Harry so painfully unfair and I wish Hermione learned the concept of privacy and confidentiality.

Ron, well, I don't expect any improvement on his part. He was always a git with inferiority complex.

I also find it really sad that Harry had been treated so lowly and unjust for all his life that he put up with a lot of unfair and crappy things from other people surrounded him and worst of all, his friends and He was so forgiving in nature that people took advantage of that.

I did disagree with some of the magical theories in this story but other than that I enjoyed it.
ljp
2009-07-20 . chapter 17
I will certainly review even though you wrote this so long ago. What I'd like to say is that you have a great writing style. I was looking for anything I could find about Andromeda and while I'm not usually interested in post-DH fic (I'd prefer the early Black sisters days), I read this one. It's a great story and I love how you've gone into the past and the present and dealt with two people so in such detailed terms. Oh, and Dudley having a witch for a daughter was great. Now I haven't gone to see what else you've written yet, so this might be answered for me but -- any chance you'll skip ahead and deal with Teddy and Mary at Hogwarts? :) Nicely done.
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