Thats a bit overdramatic at the end but thats sO expected from you~ Toph's dreams are really interesting, its brilliant that you just let the reader dive right in without really any notice that its real or fantasy until the end. I hope to read how Sokka ended up in a caged situation in the later chapters to come, right?

Your author's note of the first chapter at the end wasn't funny. Just so you know. xP

YAY for SquirrelScorpians. Avatar was really inventive with that idea. Heh heh I like how I know what this anime is all about now..

Well that's really all I have to say. I'm quite enjoying it thus far and the sadisticness just shows and broadens what you can actually write and it sounds okay too.

Cute that Toph has phophetizing dreams somewhat of what was going to happen. Sounds a bit avatar-ish.

Anywhose, why do I get the feeling that you are saying something behind this story? Didn't you base Toph's char off someone? I forget, but feel free to remind me~ I'm ending this with a typical verse: Keep it UP!

Really good! Update soon :)

You story is simply great, your writing is easy to read and the way you depict the fighting scenes is so good that it feels like we are in the middle of the action. Besides that, I'm amazed at the way you keep everyone in character. Waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. ^_^

zomg this was incredibly captivating-everyone was so in character!! I can't wait for the next chapter-it'll definately be worth it! ;)

It's been a while since your last update, so I had to go back and read my other review, then skim the previous chapter... but that's okay, because I'm enjoying the story.

I like to references to Yue, and I also enjoyed Toph's dream. Once again you incorporate wonderful descriptions with rather thrilling scenes, so I think it's pretty awesome. Enjoying every minute of it! Update soon (or, you know, whenever you can)!

Yay! I knew keeping this on story alert was a good idea! Thanks for updating. I really liked this chapter, and I'm looking forward to your next update!

Yo great story! I love they way you have approced Sokka and Toph. This paring is different than any other one I can think of, for any series. Katara and Aang remind me of the Shinji Misato from Eva, shes a little older than him and has a motherly love for aang, as well as a "couples" love. Sokka and Toph are like two very close friends, the show drops hint of a developing crush that is very similar to how Aang/Katara started, but the difference is the friendship between them. The difference is the Katara and Aangs friendship is based off there love, while Toph and Sokka's love is based on there friendship.

The big thing I wanted to point out that NOONE has seen so far is important to the story. It looks like Yue is looking out for Sokka and Toph as well. Every time something major happens in this story Topy has a vision like dream. It seems that nobody has noticed that...TOPH IS BLIND!! For her to see in a dream means that someone with MAJOR power is helping out, and since they happen at night my money is on Yue. I personaly believe that at the end of the series Toph, Sokka or Suki will have white hair, I dont know which but I think it would be fitting, of the 3 Sokko would look the best. Keep up the good work, there arnt many good Toka stories on here.

This story is excellent so far! Please update soon!

You MUST update soon! I'm begging you as a Tokka-er!

please contiue i thouroughly enjoy your stories!

Hey. It's been a while since an update. Are you continuing this? I'd really like a new chapter! ^_^

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That was unbelievable! AND YOU FINALLY MADE IT! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER!

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YAY!

Looks like a good start for a story! You kind of freaked me out for a second there. Man, Toph has some bad dreams. I don't know if purposely making Toph sick would be something Sokka would do, but I guess with the combined pressures of impulsiveness and serious embarrassment it would be possible. Besides, it makes for an interesting first chapter.

I love your descriptions. I think that's what stood out the most to me - how you wrote their actions, their feelings. That's always important, and I think you pulled it off nicely. Definitely looking forward to more!