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Reviews For: If You Give Dean A Paperclip

Andromeda03
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abusehehehe, giggle. I loved it. Great analysis.
-Rommie
Vanekgirl26
2007-09-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was a really good story, altho i don't watch the show and i got the charachters confused in my head for pretty much the entire story, but good job!
Ghostwriter
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseHa ha ha. Funny. Catch ya on the flip side.
dartigen
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseSomehow, this makes me think of a Rube Goldberg machine. Supernatural style. The paperclip leads to the...okay, I've confused myself. Whereabouts did the bar fit in?
Anyway, yeah, do one for Sam, it could turn out very interesting. How you'd get a similar situation to this is a little beyond my caffiene-deprived muse-on-holiday-ed self right now.
kelly
2007-08-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved the story! I really liked how you "copied" the book and put a (female) reader as his companion. Did you know Mouse has a 'sequel"?
Middleageslover
2007-08-12
ch 1,
abuseHaha. This was adorable! It had me laughing the entire time, and it was clever too. Kudos to you and your brother! I think one with Sam would be awesome!
Manavie
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseWow that was really cool.
You should do a one for Sam too.
Lilwazzabug
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseAw that was soo cute!!:D
lifeneedscarcasim
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseum HILLARIOUS one of my favorite books. And me and my family are always like if you give a woman chocolate or if you give my dad a flat screen tv. It is so much fun to make up new stories with that book
Surfredia
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseha, i used to love these books as a kid... heck, i still love them. very much written like the author of 'if you give a mouse a cookie' and 'if you give a moose a muffin'. ha, you should write one with sam... very amusing!
pringle.sam
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseI like! It was very cute..especially shirtless Dean.
Please do one for Sam boy! -sends over Winchocolate cookies with a pleading expression-
exitlight
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseThat's cute and totally Dean. Write one about Sammy too!
carocali
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseVery cute! I'd love to see one for Sam too! I was wondering where he was - until the end, of course!

:D
Caroline
ocfan
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abusereally cute and funny!! i liked it a lot
St0pSmackinMe07
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseomgosh i loved this!! I love the story if you give a Mouse a Cookie. there's another one like it, "If you Give a Moose a Muffin" they're both really cute.

and i loved this. its so funny. and true. made me smile. :D

you should totally do one for Sammy. like "if you giva Sammy a computer." he'll want to hack into it and steal personal info. lol.
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