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| Andromeda03 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abusehehehe, giggle. I loved it. Great analysis. -Rommie |
| Vanekgirl26 2007-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a really good story, altho i don't watch the show and i got the charachters confused in my head for pretty much the entire story, but good job! |
| Ghostwriter 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseHa ha ha. Funny. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| dartigen 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseSomehow, this makes me think of a Rube Goldberg machine. Supernatural style. The paperclip leads to the...okay, I've confused myself. Whereabouts did the bar fit in? Anyway, yeah, do one for Sam, it could turn out very interesting. How you'd get a similar situation to this is a little beyond my caffiene-deprived muse-on-holiday-ed self right now. |
| kelly 2007-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved the story! I really liked how you "copied" the book and put a (female) reader as his companion. Did you know Mouse has a 'sequel"? |
| Middleageslover 2007-08-12 ch 1, | abuseHaha. This was adorable! It had me laughing the entire time, and it was clever too. Kudos to you and your brother! I think one with Sam would be awesome! |
| Manavie 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really cool. You should do a one for Sam too. |
| Lilwazzabug 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAw that was soo cute!!:D |
| lifeneedscarcasim 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseum HILLARIOUS one of my favorite books. And me and my family are always like if you give a woman chocolate or if you give my dad a flat screen tv. It is so much fun to make up new stories with that book |
| Surfredia 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseha, i used to love these books as a kid... heck, i still love them. very much written like the author of 'if you give a mouse a cookie' and 'if you give a moose a muffin'. ha, you should write one with sam... very amusing! |
| pringle.sam 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseI like! It was very cute..especially shirtless Dean. Please do one for Sam boy! -sends over Winchocolate cookies with a pleading expression- |
| exitlight 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseThat's cute and totally Dean. Write one about Sammy too! |
| carocali 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! I'd love to see one for Sam too! I was wondering where he was - until the end, of course! :D Caroline |
| ocfan 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abusereally cute and funny!! i liked it a lot |
| St0pSmackinMe07 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseomgosh i loved this!! I love the story if you give a Mouse a Cookie. there's another one like it, "If you Give a Moose a Muffin" they're both really cute. and i loved this. its so funny. and true. made me smile. :D you should totally do one for Sammy. like "if you giva Sammy a computer." he'll want to hack into it and steal personal info. lol. |