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| shadowphoenix101 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuse*gasp* that it was...just holy hell...That was amazing and the descriptions were just mind blowing they were so good...*grumbles* wish i could write descriptions like that. A few big words i didnt understand but i got through it sorta...'dappled' for one *shrugs* i probly do know what it is but just cant think of it atm. Meanie Brookie...Goading Kai and taunting him so that he lashed out thats not nice at all...Cant you see that Kais not in any ocntrol of his self and there you go just deciding to get him all worked up *shakes head* Loved it immensely luv Turkey |
| Lamanth 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuse*makes babbling sounds* Wow, umm Ok ... just give me a minuet. *takes a deep breath* OH MY FUCKING GODS! I ABSOLUTELY BLOODY LOVED IT! IT WAS SO AMAZING I THINK I’M GONNA HAVE A FIT! I was like WOW! The whole thing just blew me away, I was trembling when I got to the end it’s that incredible! I was playing 'Poison' by Alice Cooper while I was reading it, and damn me if the song wasn't just made for this fic. I have no words for how much I loved this, it was so out of this world that I think I'm floating on clouds. But storm clouds with lots of lightning. This is so going right on my farorite stories list. It's the best birthday prezzy you could have giving me, thank you so very, very much. I just hope you like yours. Loving you so very much my Squish Cloud |