Cute. Very good!

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Please tell me there's more. Don't leave me on a cliff-hanger. There are too many of those in the world. You have to write more, you just have to.

Oh, the cute, I'm such a sucker for a happy ending. These two are so bittersweet, it's nice to pop into the fandom and find nice little things like these, showing us what might have been. :)

Very much in Ivanova's character to be nice in a pragmatic way. Thanks for continuing this nice story.

I know this sounds cheesy, but: Aw, how cute!
I just love the two of them. And you write Marcus perfectly, his happiness at having something to himself was really touching.

Thanks for this christmas present :o)

Okay, while I'm not usually the romantic type, I'd like to see more of this. I have this thing for warrior women, so Ivanova will always have a warm place in my heart, and Marcus was my idol. Kudos to one of the best writers in FF!

Okay, nice. More please! Next week good for you? hehehehe!

I can even give you an idea.. susan mentions/whines she can't go home and when pressed why she lets it slips Marcus is taking a shower. Cue teasing!

I've read almost all of your stories, and they're all pretty much awesome. It's cool that you decided to continue this little one-shot. You could probably even turn this into a series of stories. Either way, great tie-in. Hope you start writing again soon!

Good one. Marcus and Ivanova were two of my favs on B5. You were so spot on with their characters, especially Ivanova. Great parting line she had for him. And I can totally picture Marcus doing all those "helpful gremlin" things for her.

B5 Forever!

Great story! Brought a smile to my face!

This was great!! It was the first B5 fanfic I ever read and I haven't watched the series for years, so I'm not even sure how I ended up here, but boy am I glad I stumbled upon something good right at the beginning :o) I adored Susan's and Marcus' realtionship way back when... *sigh*
Thanks for this!
You really have talent!

I love that there's good Babylon 5 fanfic out there. I thought you captured the relationship between Marcus Cole and Ivanova so well; his puppylike adoration and her toughness.

"Marcus decided to have a 'talk' with him" Hee hee.
This was a lot of fun. I hope you've written other things.

Beautifully written. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

I've read a lot of wannabes and crap on this site, but you have real talent. I really enjoyed this short story, for I love simple romance between great characters, and you portrayed a possible interaction very well. Keep in mind that would technically be AU, since Ivonova clearly stated that she was never really kind to Marcus and never displayed her emotions to him, though they were present. But the story was very sweet, well thought out and the personalities were well portrayed. I give it a 7/10. I look forward to your future works.

Sincerest Always, M. A. Joslyn- Glassraptor

I'm so glad you are back and with a gem no less! This was just perfect! A wonderful way to start my morning. Thank you!