OMFG. THAT WAS HILARIOUS!! It was the best! I agree with you, I love nasty jokes but I actually CAN'T STAND reading through those 'lemons'. They make me uncomfortable and I always skip them. Thank you for this parody! ^_^

I'm really tired but I don't think that's why I'm so amused ^^ this was REALLY quite funny

oh, please let that be it. i don't think i could take a sequel or anything. my stomach just isn't up to it. i mean, i can only laugh so hard before my stomach tries to explode. holy jeeze this was hilarious. loved it, and i really needed a laugh.

Hahahaha, this was great!

that is singularly **THE MOST disturbing thing i've ever read. EVER.
...but, all in the same, it was perfect. and hilarious. and EPIC!win.
heartsheartshearts.

Pure crack-fic love!! Seriously, it was like every lemon I've ever read rolled into one wonderfully hilarious mess. I still can't stop giggling from the image of Kisame saying "meanie poo" and "Don't question it, just do it".

*laughing so hard that mentioned person got thrown out of school library*

Omy dear God. I love you as a writer! I laughed through the whole thing, especially the " pumping pole of penile power into your searing hot tunnel of orgasmic love.” your awesome.
Loved It!

lol that was a really funny crack fic

*Gasps* AIR! NEED AIR!
what are u on and where did u get it?...Did Kisame just say meanie poo? LMAO!! *rushed to the ER for lack of oxygen*

what on earth this is some seriously funny crack

LMFAO that was great. I never laughed so hard in my life XD This was just too much (wipes tear) Great job (two thumbs up) ^-^

LMAO! Loved it, especially the commentary between story bits. Too funny & such a droll poke at pornfic. :)

ahahahahahahaha! that was hilarious! omigosh! i loved it. rofl. kisame, sakura, and the weather channel. i love it!

This is probably the weirdest,most crack-filled smut i've ever read. And,trust me,i've read a lot of smut. And...I LOVE IT xD I nearly died of laughter. You kick ass. This story rocks. Definitely going on my Alerts/Favorites.