Try do your best my dear, the time is essential.

This is an interesting crossover! Never seen a Charmed/Transformers fan fic! Very one of a kind! But there seems to be some continuities problems with this fic, mainly becuase you mentioned Cole. Cole doesn't appear after Andy died, and you have Andy alive in this fic. Unless its AU or it was an error you made, you surely made a continuity mistake. Besides some grammer problems, this fan fic is worth readig, and the idea of Charmed and Transformers makes it more exciting. As a fan of Transformers, both old and new I gotta say! Great Job! Perphaps I smell some G1 bots in this one! And I agree the dinobots should appear.

Oh man Frenzy better not be gone for good! But this story is fricken awesome. But its going kinda slow. When will the Charmed ones meet the Bots for real?

Whats with the mountain lion. Will you be using the Autobots from the movie or theres more in this one? Can't wait!

Aw sweet UPDATE! I can't wait for the Transformers arrive. Something tells me that Mountain Lion has something to do with Ravage. Will the Dinobots and Ultra Magus appear as well? Will San abd Mikaela appear to, or they donn't! Can'rt wait for the next update. Oh don't forget Scorponok.

I'm an old fan of Charmed, so curiosity is what led me to read this unlikely crossover.

So...what can I say? The writing style is mature, but the storyline is kind of...plodding along quite slowly. I'd like to see more of the Transformers characters soon, and what the Decepticons wanted with the Book of Shadows and Prue.

Ok! I'm really liking this story so far! That was hilarious with Frenzy, poor thing! Though I can imagine something like this happening to him.

Nice job, keep up the chapters I can't wait to see the reaction from either side when they meet the autobots!

Ok... Never Watched charmed before, I figured it was like Buffy, which meant in my mind that it was overy sexist and classified women as the supposed forms of never ending beauty and anachronistic feminity...
But the way you've written the story so far makes me interested in watching the show. You've done an excellent job at making the characters into people instead of bimbos. I like the flow of the story and the interesting idea of this particular crossover. I cannot wait for the three witches to be introduced to their latest foes/enemies...
I just hope the Autobots and Decepticons can grasp the versatile concept of magic before it turns around to bite both of them in the afts...

I found this chapter a bit confusing. Half of it were grumbles from Prue or Piper, and it was too focused on the sisters' inner ramblings and too little on what was actually happening. Besides, didn't Andy die long before Phoebe met Cole? Or are making an AU?

Yes! *bricked* Alright, I've really been waiting for this one, so it's a relief for me to know that i can expect updates; I always find a good one but then the author decides to put it off for special reasons,so yeah. *gives a jar of cookies* Thanks for updating!

I really like this story. Charmed and TF are two of my fave shows. I can't wait to see more of the mechs and I can't wait for more updates. So update ASAP!

Awesome job on updating this wicked crossover story.

Good luck on chapter 6.

I wonder how Piper and the others will react when they meet Optimus Prime and the autobots and Starscream & the decepticons later on?

O.M.G. WHAT IS A MOUNTAIN LION DOING IN A PARK! I can't wait to know what's going to happen!! Don't worry I won't stone you :D And I wonder what's gonna happen to Prue?! Only time will tell ^^

Yay!
Updating soon!!
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*attack glomp!*

Jazz.