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| kyootie vtgrl 2008-08-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseupdate nhanh len!! |
| Dreamz Midnit3 T3arz 2008-08-27 ch 7,  | abuse...oh...my...god..what...the..hell..happened? |
| KgirlXG 2008-08-27 ch 7, anon. | abusedamn it not another cliffy! |
| Brok3n Shards 2008-08-27 ch 7, | abuseaww man, that's too bad! |
| x lEsLie 2008-08-27 ch 7, | abuse*sighs* Your whole life is like an Asuan drama, not quite like American soap opera because everyone in soaps are like rich and crap =P What to say about this chapter? Here's my honest opinion: It sucked. No, seriously, it's not just "horrible" - it SUCKED. I liked how you started the chapter, but then it went down from there and kicked it up a notch at the end. What happened? Jeez. All that summer fling gone to your head huh? =P Well, pull it together, hun. You still have one more year to go. The rewrite better be good AND the next chapter. Take a long ass time to write the next chapter if you need to; I don't want to see crap like this again. You know I still love you ;D hugz and kisses! |
| UnKnoWn z Essence 2008-08-27 ch 7, | abuseFor some reason I couldn't log in yesterday...but anyway, I read this yesterday but now I don't quite remember what I read. Please don't take it into offence, but I have to say that this isn't your "best" work. I think it's maybe because you were rushing to get the chapter out? It was a good chapter, but I believe it could have been BETTER. I did like the interaction between Sakura and Syaoran though. And the ending... Horrible ending! You're killing me here. lol. Updarte soon! |
| Inkirietta 2008-08-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseOh I would not say that that was a horrible chapter, although most people would say that because of that lovely cliffhanger, but even though it seems to be anoying, I must say that I prefer having the suspence than getting to know what happens right away, the more suspence the better, so a thumbs up from me. Super interesting chapter, can't wait to see what happens next! I'm wondering now if whatever happened has to do with Mei Ling's father... but anyways I'll just wait and see... smiLe ^-^ |
| yUra-Kun 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abuseaww, it was getting to the good part too! gosh now we have to wait for three months for an update...how cruel of you... |
| YingfaFx 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter as allwys, It´s worth the wait!! Carry on!! |
| younggem 2008-08-24 ch 7, | abusewow, this story is amazing(: I absolutely love it. I really hope you put Tomoyo and Eriol back in the story. It feels like something's missing when theyre not there. I can;t wait till the next chapter |
| baby p0p 2008-08-24 ch 7, | abuseNO, NO, NO, NO0O0O0! MORE!! |
| roxxy f0xxy 2008-08-24 ch 7, | abuseit was a good chapter, and i noticed that you started to use their names in the end, is that on purpose or was it by mistake because you were rushing to get the chapter out? i don't know, but if it was on purpose, then I can understand why. yeah, they're getting closer and all, so I guess that's one way of showing that they're closer without having to state it. sorta like show but don't tell i suppose. well, i have to say that you are most evil by leaving us at such a spot. ahh, i'm dying to know what happened to Touya. is he hurt? but what I want to know most is what's going to happen the next chapter. will he be okay? i hope you won't "make him disappear" like Raven and Pi and leave us hanging with our own opinions and all that. okay, I'm not making any sense with this review. have to go to work soon, that's why. well pls update soon, i know you're probably going to be real busy with school, but do try to update soon! |
| miZ PerFECTionist 2008-08-24 ch 7, anon. | abuseAH HAH! I KNEW THE CHAPTER WAS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE! I KNEW IT! My friend and I are currently using the public library's computer right now, she thought I was being paranoid when I keep saying that something bad is going to happen in the end. The librarian had to shush us when we both screamed out bloody murder at the cliffy. My friend says to update soon! And that goes for me as well. Good luck in school! Today was my first day of school =B |
| xBaoVyx17 2008-08-24 ch 7, | abuseyay she admits to liking him! |
| dArk sk8ter x 2008-08-24 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter. Update soon. |