 sodapop765 2007-11-22 . chapter 1This was so well written it hurts. |
 Zanisha 2007-08-17 . chapter 1Wow.
That was absolutely brilliant.
It's hard to hate Peter after reading something like this. And it's perfectly fitting too. I mean, the last line, WOW.
Excellent. Fave. :D |
 Gothic Tulip 2007-08-11 . chapter 1Well now, that is a different take. Well done. |
 seductionandcandlelight 2007-08-11 . chapter 1perfect. an excellent, beautifully written piece that really... i dono. it reaches the reader, somehow. or maybe thats just me? but no, i really think this is incredible writing. and i understand all sides of the equation here, which is unusual in most fanfictions.
only thing i was confused about was the title... |
 xXmarionetteXx 2007-08-11 . chapter 1Actually, I didn't read your, uh, story; I just thought I'd tell you your name was cool. |
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