^^ nice

oh, so adorable! i love your fic!! kazuki and juubei are a mtach made in heaven!! :-)

Hm... It's well written, in terms of style, grammar, spelling, and general continuity.

But I can't shake off the thought that this is probably the same plot line for most JK fics. It's a bit too clichéd for my liking.

Otherwise, you write well.

It's beautiful, i like it a lot. Can't wait for the next chapeter!!