amazingly well written.
though i'm a bit sad at the ending, i honestly thought you would make them get together again. but hey, who am i to say? the muse is not mine :). nonetheless it's a very good story. keep up the good work!

this story is ** stupid!

that was beautiful.
I loved that it didnt end 'happily ever after'
you never see to many of those.

it was sad, but i liked it

*makes some sort of incomprehensible sqwuaking noises*

Eh??

EHH??

WAH... Bwah.. Gah... *goes and curls up in a corner to bawl*

On the other hand...

s'been a while since I've read some good angsty depressing kaito/aoko luff.. and this is most definitely love. So excellent excellent fic and now I'm going to go back to making my indignent squawking noises ^^;;