this a grate story i have read tow of storys and they are amazing. your storys are my favert on this site

good story...10/10...nice continuation.

Dear Espeon master,
that was a pretty good story for your first time out, and although there were a few hiccups, it is still a pleasurable story to read. I read this after reading "the Honeymoon's over" by Antithesis and I must say, you really handled the universe well while developing your own unique style. It's still honey moon's over, but you still have a unique voice in your writting. Ok, let's get past the analytical things and get to the raves: OH MY GOD, BOAZ WAS SUCH A *Censored*! The evolutionary choices for the siblings seemed to match what was set up in HO...aww, poor Deliah...Ash's father(Ahem, I mean Nathan), seems like less of an antagonist than he was portrayed in the first story...nice little twist in the ending with the next generation, Mira Ketchem...All in all, a nice first fic that leaves you wanting more..nice work, my fellow author. I'll continue on to your next story. See ya soon...
Jonseycat, out! MEE-YAA!
PS: My first pokemon fic was also a spin-off of an established story that you might be familliar with...
PPS: You don't have to check it out knowing,your busy scheduel...
PS:Dang, long review. ^_^
Ok, I"m realy going now. BYE!MEE-YAA!

do number 3 and i wont kill you

Shane loves POKEMON:kills shane likes pokemon MUAHAHAHAHA CRAP HE TWITCHING RUNS AWAY

what happend well lets see...shane your dead

dark shane:sigh they are so embaresing anaway 3 3 3 got it

i just finished reading, and this is really really really good! i can't wait to read the sequal! ~condawg1~

A pretty good story but why are some things setup from Antithesis' story basicly changed in tghis story?

In the first story it was shown if your in pokemon form, you kids are born pokemon, so this would be the same of the human and anthro forms, human form=human kids & anthro form=anthro kids

and the only way to tranform between forms is through the stones so all the kits need is there very own stones and then they can become humans like their parents and even become anthros or back to eeves at will (yes it works both ways as it's said in the first storie)

So if Mira was born while Misty was in Human form, she would be a normal human, not a shapeshifter (for her to become an eevee she'd need a stone like her parents and grandfather)

sadly your story is proof some people don't like sequals when there's are different writer for it (it's even the same for movies) cause the don't fully follow the rules and universe set by the first story

but you did say this was your firt story so I forgive you for that, and I've seen you're ready doing a sequal for this story too so goodluck on that story aswell

Nice ending but it seemed a little bit quick. Anyway hope you have a sequel.

*sigh* I spent all that time trying to give the idea and it was already finished *sigh* Oh well, I'll just look forward to what happens next and take the idea I suggested and use it in my fic!

1. Ash and Misty's new daughter will be able to turn into a Pokemon. Should I make it Eevee, or a different evolution?

>Eevee.

2. What will the name be?

>River, Stream, Lake, Cascade, or Aura? I know thre of the names sound weird but River sounds best out of the three, if the starter is a Water type. Cascade came from the Cerulean Gym's badge and Aura...came from part of the name of the city 'Blue Aura Surrounds the City' or something like that? I like Cascade or Aura but Aura is perfect but these are just suggestions.

3. What will her first Pokemon be? Will it be a starter, or should I make her bring one of her siblings?

>Poliwag, her own Staryu, Squirtle or maybe one of her siblings? Spark might do? But I think a Water type is suitable so...Poliwag.

4. She will eventually fall in love, but with who? A brother, one of her Pokemon, or a human?

>One of her Pokemon, preferably the one she started out with or a human...best that he has a past of his own as well, I guess he could also be another Pokemorpher? Or he could not even be one at all and could be working for the bad guy side at first.

5. Will she simply try to beat all of the gyms, and fall in love, or should I throw some of Team Rocket acts too?

>Yeah, the 'beat all gyms, conquer Leagues' is fine and so's the falling in love but you should also do something like she saw a really rare *cough* Legendary *cough* Pokemon and wants to find it. The perfect one...Suicune or Cresselia since they run all over the place.

6. Will her siblings still be living with her father and mother, or will they have already been chosen by other trainers?

>That's hard but I think they should stay, except Spark. He should travel with Aura and as her future Electric type or he could even evolve into an Umbreon one day?

That's the best I can come up with and btw Aura is a nice name when you think about it and I think the idea about her love being on the bad guy side at first is good too!

If you're going to skip ahead 6 weeks, you might as well skip 9 months. I really don't see the point of making it that quick.

And if you're going to ask for opinions, wait longer than a day for answers. I was halfway through answering the questions when you posted this chapter.

Take your time with the follow-up. It's going to take a lot to make sure it's not just another "Ash and Misty's Kid who can shapeshift is going off on her training journey R&R plz!" type story.

Hehehe, I'd say Raine but that's for my fic but if I was going to pick a name, it'd have to do with tranquility, water, or hope. As in the meaning of the name I mean lol. So I've been meaning to ask: Is there a way for the kits to become humans as well? If they grow up to quickly...

Arigato

You don't need to make the paragraphs bold. Other than that, it's a good start. Now, for the questions:

1) Eevee, since she will be a child. The evolution will come when... you know, she get to *that* age.

2) Whatever you want.

3) Whatever you want.

4) Not one of *her* brothers, I hope! That's... um, that's kinda wrong.

5) Whatever you want.

6) Some of them will have moved on, some won't, but all will have evolved. I'm working on that fic, btw.

1. Eevee
2. Mira
3. Chimchar
4. Human
5. No Team Rocket
6. Still with Ash and Misty

Name: Mira
Power: Ability to morph into a Flareon