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| vincents1lover 2008-03-04 ch 4,  | abuseaw so sad, and i lvoe it! fav chap! (maybe because i'm jackie-obseszsed) |
| Ghostwriter 2007-12-02 ch 4, | abuseGreat introspects. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Whilom 2007-08-27 ch 4, | abuseAww, it's so cute! I loved the last one about Jack, it's adorable. Whilom |
| CaptainSammish 2007-08-27 ch 2, | abuseYou're entirely welcome for the reviews! Well, I went through the story again and I only picked out a couple of instances. It was really the only thing that I could find wrong with the story at all, and I always want to try and leave at least a LITTLE constructive criticism. *want's to steal (chapter 2) *all of the other's (chapter 3) *looks to thick (chapter 4) [and that's not even punctuation, I just noticed it on the re-read] And that's completely everything that I could find, and I nit-pick, so that's really, really good on your part. Like I said, I just wanted to find SOME improvement you could make, since the story is already extremely well-written. And that's all I could find! :D |
| lovePEOPLEandCOWBOY 2007-08-24 ch 2, | abuseje suis contente que tu aies écrit pour les quatres enfin. L'émotion est poignante, on ne peut qu'être touché. vraiment bien. |
| CaptainSammish 2007-08-23 ch 4, | abuseVery nice. I especially loved the section on Angel, about him learning to share from Sofi. The only thing I would recommend is to take care with your punctuation. Sometimes it's thrown in where it shouldn't be. |
| Spottedstar106 2007-08-23 ch 4, | abuseAh . . . That was sweet!:D |
| Sparks Diamond 2007-08-23 ch 4, | abusewow...amazing story! i really loved it! Keep on writing more stories! -Addie |
| otterwarrior16 2007-08-23 ch 4, | abuseThat was really sweet. It brought tears to my eyes. Great job. |
| Annonie 2007-08-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseAw, you just reminded me why I love Jack. Beautiful writing. I'm seriously blinking back tears. |
| DyerFire 2007-08-22 ch 4, | abusethis was really...nice. i don't really know how else to say it. very well done. i like your style. :D (smiley-face of approval) |
| cutelildevil666 2007-08-22 ch 4, | abuseAw, I really loved that! I love how you showed how each character was when they came to Evelyn. Great fic! |
| animelover 2007-08-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseawsome dude! plz write more storys like this its nice to kno how they settled in! |
| Whilom 2007-08-21 ch 3, | abuseThis is great so far, and promises to be an interesting series. I can't wait for Jack's chapter! Whilom |
| moxielover 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was just... beautiful. I don't think there's any other word for it. Please keep this up. |