Well, I'm not going to lie... Your story blew my mind to pieces, splattering my monitor with chunks of what I deem to be brain. Haha, aside from my poorly chosen metaphor, this story is absolutely awe inspiring, amazing, and a notion that words cannot describe. You have next to perfect descriptions, humor, and dialogue balance. I REALLY do hope you choose to continue this at some point or another, if you aren't doing so already.
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Kinger

New reader here! Your story is freaking amazing! From descriptions to dialogue, it's incredibly balanced and each chapter is very well thought out. The characters are very well portrayed and I absolutely enjoy reading what you have posted thus far!
Bottom line, you MUST continue with this story, PLEASE!?!

oh em gee! I enjoyed this soo much!I just really got into the bridge to teribithia and this was really awesome! I have found that i prefer stories in which Leslie didn't die, and this one did that perfectly. It was cute, has a awesome plot line, was funny, witty, and just all around cool! Tell me has your fanfic been doing that thing where it takes words out of your sentences? Because occasionally things at itty bitty parts didn't make sense. But it'd okay, it still rocked.! So totally awesome and can't wait for the next chapter! I wasn't you to know that i absolutly had to stay up for the better half of the night to read the whole entire thing. I started at Nine-ish, then finished at about three o'clock in the morning. I got about 3 hours asleep but it was work worth doing!

Well, I was writing a long review for this and it crashed out of nowhere. I'll try to rewrite it, but I was mostly just projecting my feelings as I typed, so it'll be difficult. You deserve the best review I can give, though, so it's worth it.


When I was young, just discovering reading and everything wonderful that came with that, I found Terabithia. I read the book and at the end of it all I was left rather depressed and wanting more in a way I couldn't possibly understand at that age. Eventually, as I moved to other books, I forgot about Terabithia. But when I turned the television on a couple days ago I was treated to the start of the movie version, and everything about the book hit me again as if I'd never left it behind. I dug out my old copy of Terabithia, read it, and was left with the same sense of wanting that I had when I was younger.

So I came here, to , looking to fill that empty space. Of course I ended up rather disappointed, each story that I found leaving me feeling more dejected than the one before. That is, until I found yours. I just have to say: Thank you.

Thank you for writing this, for continuing their story, and for telling it so well. Your writing is great, it shows us a scene without swarming the reader with details, and it's a pleasure to read. Your romance moved at a good pace, not too rushed while also not teasing the readers for all eternity, as some books seem to do. I love the little plot points that you can find in the beginnings of the story and how they connect so well to the things happening now. I do wonder if those expelled boys are responsible for the break-in and stepping into Terabithia. I look forward to how you're going to expand this further, and I'm especially looking forward to seeing how Jess and Leslie's relationship develops. I know you'll do it well.

Speaking of plots, I was incredibly surprised that this story had one, though not in a bad way. It was more like opening a gift at Christmas and finding the one thing you wanted more than anything else but were too afraid to ask for. It's nothing against you personally, it's just... people on don't usually, you know, have plots. At all. Or even know what a "plot" is.

Anyway, I've probably rambled on for much longer than I should have. I just wanted to say thanks and make that little review number jump up a bit. If Terabithia was more mainstream I'm sure you'd have hundreds of reviews, if not over a thousand.

Well, good luck with your writing and keep up the good work. Thank you for giving me something great to read, I really appreciate it. Now I'm off to go look at your Favorite Stories list to see if I can find more good stories.

Questions answered, but then more questions are raised. I'm excited to see what happens next!

So far, so good. I appreciate the grammar and spelling and the decent sized paragraphs. I liked the descriptive power of the first part and though I don't understand it, I think it promises frightening and somewhat exciting things.

Everything else is exciting and well written. I see only a few spelling and/or grammar mistakes. I will point them out to you, if you wish. The story itself is shaping up nicely, though, with intriuge, suspense, and I'm guessing a little action on the way. Keep it up!

Wow! And I thought that it couldn't get any more exciting than before! You've certainly proved me wrong!

Please update soon!

ok so what the bloody hell does it peice together, but anyway great story. But (this is just personal) i think it shifts too much from the original terabithia idea, and also I mean leslie/jesse were supposed to be like best friends I could never imagine them going out, but who cares its artistic licence, i'd call it absolutely fantastic!

Bloody hell i loved that. You have some serious talent mate, i was going to restrain until the last chapter but I can't this is bloody brilliant

Whoa! This is getting more and more exciting! Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope it won't take too long to get written.

Wow, I really hope you find the time an inspiration to continue this, as it is too great a story to let fade away. I've enjoyed the character development and the growing relationship between Leslie and Jesse, as well as the side story and characters. Please continue!

I like how you integrated parts of the original dialogue (book/film canon) into the story in the first few chapters, as if it were your fic was part of the book/movie itself. One could perhaps cut away some parts of the original story and attach this one (so that Leslie does not die!).

One thing, though-I was really saddened by the death of Bill Burke. He's one of my favorite characters (apart from Leslie and Jess, of course). And all fics I've read so far, including yours, seem to portray him in that light, too.

I sure hope you would continue writing. I'm sure are lots yet to unfold in this story.

you should defintinely continue this story! pls update soon! i want to see what happens next!

When I decided to start reading BtT fanfiction, this was exactly the type of story I was looking for. One that let Leslie live and gave the continuation of the story, and showed the progress of Jesse's and Leslie's relationship. It is beautifully written, and the story line seems believable. I'm afraid to read any other story now because they won't reach up to par with this one D8

Can't wait for the next chapter!

please please continue this the best story I have EVER read! this is genius!! I hope you don't stop this story!


please update soon. very soon!


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