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| socrgrl14 2007-09-29 ch 2, | abuseThis is good so far. What does she look like? Please tell |
| spunkymonkey5712 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseoh. I get it! I just reread chapter one and I understand now. Okay. So anyways, cool story. update soon! |
| spunkymonkey5712 2007-09-21 ch 2, | abuseI like this. Does Lily know that House is her dad? It feels like that should be a 'duh' since she sends him letters every year, but i don't know...I would have expected her to be more "woah...ur my dad"...but i bet the next chapter will explain that...maybe i'm just slow...that tends to happen a lot..anyways, love the story! |
| angelofmusic623 2007-09-21 ch 2, | abusehey - I like where this story is going - keep it up |
| Lauren81492 2007-09-21 ch 2, | abuseThis is a really good story; please continue it! |
| rikkurox 2007-09-20 ch 2, | abuseGr8 fic, I can't wait for the next chapter. House with a daughter, sounds fab! Update a.s.a.p. please! |
| kokonuts 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseWell, I like it. Hope you right more. |
| OfficerDonNZ 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abusePoor House. I can see things getting um interesting between Lily and House. And what will the ducklings have to say and Cuddy and Wilson? O suspence :) Got promise this Keep going |
| martravel 2007-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat Start! update asap ok? |