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Belle 2008-10-10 . chapter 1
Why oh why did you abandon this fic. It's so good. I would love to read more, or a sequel.
Ginny Wealsy 2008-07-07 . chapter 36
This is a very good story :) keep going
overactive imagination 15 2008-04-01 . chapter 5
Story is moving kinda slow in my opinion. Jeremy's hurt but no real drama or question that needs to be resolved to keep me interested in reading because I have to see how it's gonna turn out.
overactive imagination 15 2008-03-29 . chapter 1
Just started your story as I really liked the show. One thing I noticed is that the dialogue seems stilted. Might want to use contractions to make it sound like people really talk. Try reading aloud. Don't know how polished you want your story to be or if you just want to write and get it up to share but there were a couple of improper word use (throw instead of through) or missing words that made it hard to get your meaning (I have a spouse in this Army for almost twenty years. ??) Sorry if I'm being picky.
Loved Roxy's line about what they Army considers unlucky. lol She'd my favorite character on the show.
DD2 2008-03-02 . chapter 36
Thanks so much for the update! I am soo glad you are still writing! Please continue soon, this is a great fic!
Nicole 2008-02-06 . chapter 35
I love this story! Please update when you can!
KateH12783 2008-01-05 . chapter 35
Hey... I reviewed last night, and in hopes of breaking your writer's block, I'll try and supply a few ideas! Jeremy has been through hell... he needs the support of friends... bring Amanda back into the picture!

Perhaps she could transfer to a college closer to home, the community one that Jeremy is planning to attend, that way she can prove that she's continuing on with her life while still being there as a friend to Jeremy.

Offer Jeremy more community support somehow... I'm not sure how this could work.

Provide Jeremy with a sense of importance. Have him find a job that would make him feel needed and important. With a purpose, his life will feel more meaningful and he will become more inspired.

These are just a few thoughts that will hopefully help you overcome your writer's block!
KateH12783 2008-01-04 . chapter 1
Hoping my review will be inspiring to you! I love Army Wives and just today thought to look here for Army Wives fanfiction. Your story is absolutely amazing and I hope that this review will encourage you to keep writing!
DD2 2007-09-17 . chapter 35
Great chapter! can't wait for more! Please continue soon!
DD2 2007-09-12 . chapter 34
Great job! Please continue soon! I love this fic!
DD2 2007-09-11 . chapter 33
yet another great chapter. Honestly I wasn't sure exactly how this fic was going to play out, i think thats one of the reasons I love it so much is that I can't guess and know the ending already. I didn't expect the suicide attempt, as I was looking at his character from a standpoint like denise, that he was doing ok. But things aren't always as they seem, especially in a situation like this. I really love this fic and can't wait for more!
DD2 2007-09-10 . chapter 32
another great couple of chapters! thanks! I didn't see the fic going this way, but you really made it work, and i like it. it seems realistic to me. I love your fic! Please continue soon!
DD2 2007-09-09 . chapter 30
great chapter! Please continue soon!
DD2 2007-09-06 . chapter 29
thanks for another great chapter! that one came so fast! yay! lol. I didn't even have to wait a day! lol. continue soon!
DD2 2007-09-06 . chapter 28
Great job! Im really glad you have some idea's now, id hate for this fic to end! I look forward to reading it every day. lol. Continue soon please!
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