Very very interesting... I love the name you gave the girl...Sam Poppy...Has a nice ring to it... Cant wait to read more.

I like how the story is developing... I am very intrigued... Please update soon.

I was wondering what happened to this story. I'm glad you're working on it again.

This story seems pretty obviously abandoned. (August 07, wow.) But I just wanted to let you know that I'm really intrigued by your fic! Your writing style is excellent and the story is unusual. Asking you to continue is probably pretty useless, I know I've abandoned fics before and it's really hard to get back into one. So I'll just say that I really liked this and if you DO continue it, I'll be sure to review!

Very good first chapter. It's very gripping and I can't wait to read the next one. I really liked the frantic style you used here to mirror what the character was going through.