Please finish I want to see how that guy reacts to Tenchi and Sasami and how the family does as well. :D

I like it, even if I am not entirely happy with some parts of it. Like most people say, Tenchi/Sasami fics are to rare. I kind feel this same basic story line could been a lot better if Sasasmi wasn't quite so out of character.. or in an "advanced" form of character. Some how her growing up.. more like Ayeka just seems wrong and right. Right in that, back on juri, with nothing but Ayeka and stuffy Jurians she might turn out like that as well. But wrong in.. she lost just about everything that made Sasami, sasami and not just an Ayeka clone. Seems very unlikely this will ever update, but I hope some one reads this, and thinks of writing a simular new fic.

Great! Was it worth going through 1300 stories to find? I'd say yeah! Tenchi/Sasami and Tenchi/Kiyone are my favorite pairings, so this was really cool for me!

I really like this story... Tenchi/Sasami make the best couple in my opinion, even the creator of Tenchi Muyo said that Tenchi's best match would be a normal earth girl, thus Kiyone... but he also said it's unfortunate that she is in a position never to care for him (her career) so I nominate Sasami as 2nd most normal! :D

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! PLEASE YOU DON'T KNOW HOW LONG I'VE BEEN TRYING TO FIND A TENCHI/SASMI FIC! PLEASE DON'T STOP!

wirte more please!

wirte more! i'm dyin here! sniff sniff have you forgotten about you fans? kool!

yeah coool fic! i want more sasa/tenchi stories! i just loove them! anyway, sakuya was just a imaginary person type of thing, mad by yugi..she never existed in the first place! so there you have it k?

bai bai!

Wow!I finally am going to review this story(after sooooo long!).I like the whole story.Sasami and Tenchi are just cute together and anyway there are WAY too many Ryoko and Tenchi fans!Sasami(Tsunami) and Tenchi forever! :P

cool fic

The premonition was cool!

do more more more!

Excellent story you have here. Please continue it. Can't wait to see what happens between Tenchi & Sasami/Tsunami.

Ugh. Not only is Sasami like a little sister to Tenchi, Tsunami is practically a second mother to him. Tenchi/Sasami is just WRONG on too many levels to count.

And there's no way Tenchi would go for TWELVE YEARS without anything changing in his relationships with Ryoko and Ayeka (ie he finally realizes that he's in love with Ryoko, and breaks the news to Ayeka :D).

I liked it. There are few T/S stories out there that have an adult Sassami in them. The others are just pedophilic or hint at a romance that may happen years later when Sassami grows up.

One problem, your time line. 12 years for Sassami? yet only 3 for Tenchi. Ayeka and Ryoko are still after Tenchi, but has it been 3 years or 12 for them? Why or what kept them away from him for that long?

If you ever do a re-write, here is a sugestion:

Have it be that 3 years have past, that can be explain by Ayeka and Sassami being detained on Juri by royal duties and Ryoko trying to catch up on the universe after her 700 year imprisonment in the cave.

The "new" thing would be that when Sassami reached puberty, which could be during the 3 years, she transformed or instantly became Tsunanmi, so that she aged 8 to 10 years overnight. That would give you an adult Sassami and give you more depth and realism to the story.

Keep going! I wanna see Tenchi and Sasami get married!

i liked it. really i did