i really demand you write another chapter. here, i'll emphasize my desire to read more chapters:

WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER. PLEASE.

:D

- athemina.

I've been looking for ages trying to find a a story with Lily and James alive/alternate universe but sadly they always seem to be discontinued...hopefully that is not the case with this story, because it seems really intersesting. Hope you update soon.

jlyric

this is awesome! update soon please!

update very soon!

Its a nice start for a story! D im surprise Harry keep his cool, and James too! well i hope you keep on writing this really promising story! ]

GREAT STORY! Plz update soon.

Great start, I look so forward to more. Yes, Harry's patronus would convince his Dad I think.

Update soon.

Pam

I like it so far.

Just one thing - shouldn't that be October 31, 1981, not 1980? Is it a typo or have you changed it on purpose?

Great story but what about Teddy?

cool story

Hey, like your story! Update soon! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

First, I'm sorry if my english isn't correct but I'm French and I don't speak it very well. I like very much this first chapter and I hope it will be a new chapter quickly.

coolio cant wait till next chapter update again soon!:DALi

sound intressting

please write more it's such a good story and well written! egarly awaiting the next instalment that i hope will follow shortly!