|Reviews for Family First|
| athemina 7/10/08 . chapter 1
i really demand you write another chapter. here, i'll emphasize my desire to read more chapters:
WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER. PLEASE.
| jlyric 1/22/08 . chapter 1
I've been looking for ages trying to find a a story with Lily and James alive/alternate universe but sadly they always seem to be discontinued...hopefully that is not the case with this story, because it seems really intersesting. Hope you update soon.
| Ginny278 9/9/07 . chapter 1
this is awesome! update soon please!
| choirsinger 8/22/07 . chapter 1
update very soon!
| book-worm9008 8/21/07 . chapter 1
Its a nice start for a story! D im surprise Harry keep his cool, and James too! well i hope you keep on writing this really promising story! ]
| Winter Wisp 8/20/07 . chapter 1
GREAT STORY! Plz update soon.
| PSTurner 8/16/07 . chapter 1
Great start, I look so forward to more. Yes, Harry's patronus would convince his Dad I think.
| Wonderfoal 8/14/07 . chapter 1
I like it so far.
Just one thing - shouldn't that be October 31, 1981, not 1980? Is it a typo or have you changed it on purpose?
| EmeraldSeaFrost 8/13/07 . chapter 1
Great story but what about Teddy?
| deco 8/13/07 . chapter 1
| LAGal 8/13/07 . chapter 1
Hey, like your story! Update soon! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Erylis 8/13/07 . chapter 1
First, I'm sorry if my english isn't correct but I'm French and I don't speak it very well. I like very much this first chapter and I hope it will be a new chapter quickly.
| Aliolyoxenfree 8/13/07 . chapter 1
coolio cant wait till next chapter update again soon!:DALi
| jolly-for-heart07 8/13/07 . chapter 1
| deluwiel 8/13/07 . chapter 1
please write more it's such a good story and well written! egarly awaiting the next instalment that i hope will follow shortly!