Funny as Hell loll

AW, poor thing! XD

Extremely well written. Two thumbs up! -

Yasu

Hee hee! Yay akward 'friend' relationships. Poor Naota... there's no way he can be right whatever he answers.

Haha, those two are so funny together!

Great story, I loved it. That was just like them.

It's pretty good. A nice little one-shot here.

i love it you got the characters nailed. but try to write somethin longer

lol amusing

Well isn't that cute. I might have puked if they kissed or somesuch. "Trapped in a ferris wheel" is quite a common rommantic scenario, but I'm glad you didn't go down that road. This is more like what they're relationship would be like. Naota thinking the look amusement in Ninamori's eyes was due to her contacts was one of my favorite lines