|Reviews for The Roaring Snake|
| Stormshadow13 4/22/13 . chapter 29
Awsome story. Love all of the plot and the way that the characters are written. Your information and thought on the wizarding world is really cool.
| allanreimer 3/5/13 . chapter 7
My apologies for not commenting on this when it came out. I normally read Hp/Hg and HP/(anyone-other-than-ginny) but somehow missed this one. That intro completed; you named a character "Soccer-Ball?" Love it!
| Silverfawkes 2/4/13 . chapter 29
| Scabbers1957 1/28/13 . chapter 4
The only thing I have to say about this so far:::::If Minerva or anyone had really wanted to find out what Harrys life was really like::::they could have done a little bit of passive Legitimes (not sure if that is the correct spelling) on him. Other than that this story is really good.
| Judaphine 1/7/13 . chapter 29
Although I enjoyed the story, you propensity to use large words in the wrong context detracted from it quite a bit. Many of the words you chose didn't fit the plot, the phrase they were used in and occasionally seemed contrived. I'm a native speaker of the English language (proper English-English in fact) with all of my highest achievements being in English, Literature and Languages to the point that I studied Linguistics at University and I spent much of my time reading this story either having to re-read sentences or skip sections that didn't make any sense. Here's a bit of advice for you, you don't need to use a word (or make up one) just because it's big or sounds important. It may be of no use to you or just make you sound like Don King.
| AlbinoBee 12/29/12 . chapter 9
Love the intro for Millicent. She's in and a part of Harry's crew, but it doesn't feel forced in anyway. Very natural. Great job.
| ForSer 12/24/12 . chapter 1
Great story. I will be glad to read the sequel.
| Inferius1957 11/28/12 . chapter 30
This was a totally riveting and well written story, I wish more "writers" were as good or at least try to do this good. I'll add this to my story favorites. I'll start reading your sequel asap.
| tonygestaple 10/29/12 . chapter 30
I really enjoyed your story. You've put a tremendous amount of work into it and it shows, ie, all the faves and follows, as well as all the reviews. The only thing that annoyed me was that the dialogue sounded do stiff and formal, not like children talking at all. Maybe it's due to Pureblood wizards being so formal, I don't know, but that's my opinion on it, anyway. I'm going to start reading the sequel, now, hoping that it'll be updated sometime soon. Thank you for posting The Roaring Snake.
| kitza 10/24/12 . chapter 12
so... if I'm black, and we're studying together. I say something annoying about you getting special privledges and your friend calls me the "N" word (even indirectly), my leaving is a betrayal of YOU?
I dislike your Harry. he's like a sociopath, the only emotions we've seen from him are anger and maybe a little hurt (he didn't behave hurt, but you specifically said he felt or looked hurt so I'll take your word for it) apparently all of his friends are replaceable too. ick. Millicent deserves better..
| BetaPAWDkitsune 8/30/12 . chapter 30
Great story. I really enjoyed this. Many aspects were things that I found to be very interesting and it perhaps makes this story one of the best I have read. I can't wait to read the sequel :D
Many thanks for sharing.
| Guest 7/27/12 . chapter 22
This story sucks smelly donkey d ck. why the hell would u do this? I thought it was awesome at the beginning but now I am solo bored. All it is is harry getting manipulated, he surprises a few people, manipulators manipulate some more, Harry gets manipulated, blah blah blah. It's so boring! What the hell! Hurry up and get on with the interesting part of your writing, cos at the minute, u r bloody dull.
| Guest 7/27/12 . chapter 11
Good story so far, but when rita is tryin to interview Harry Millicent sort of disappears at the end of the chapter. I suggest fixing that.
| corrwin 6/9/12 . chapter 29
Awesome story. Political!Harry at its best. Realistic Dark/Light politics, manipulative Dumbledore we all can hate, smart Harry... story joined my personal Hall of Fame.
| Oracle10 5/22/12 . chapter 4
I'm finding this story very interesting, but I do have one or two little suggestions. some of the sentences seem a little awkward and you use a lot of Americanisms. It might be a good idea if you got someone to beta this who has a good grasp of British English and give the story a nice polish. I would also recommend a bit of re-writing. You tend to over explain portions and the story could be a little more streamlined.