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rasa weaves
2008-06-23
ch 15, anon.
abuseI loved this story. I think in chapters 13 and 14 you lost something, but i can't really decide what it was that was different about your writing, so yeah, i might just be crazy. But you wrapped it up so well, plus i am still laughing at nipple tent.

You had some great moments in here where you got your point accross without overstating it, and, well, i felt it was one of the more realistic romances as far as fan fiction goes, nice work.
trusuprise
2007-11-19
ch 15,
abuseSing for Me was wrapped up very nicely. The awkward give and take between Minako and Rei early in the chapter was endearing. The second scene shows the reader that the relationship between Rei and Minako is slowly evolving. Minako drops a hint that she'd find it interesting to go back to London, and this sets the stage for her to go get her Glitter award and for Rei to train in Kyoto before meeting again in the Final Act.

The bonus scenes were absolutely awesome. 'om-nipple-tent' had me snorting and laughing in my cube, and I liked the way you strung it out across all the snippets. I liked your view of the last fifty years of the Sil Mil. The fate of the planets sounds unsurprisingly like the one I've assignined for my PGSM Sil Mil. Great minds, I'd say? In any case, I really liked the concept of Venus and Mars in Minako and Rei's mind. You could spin that into a whole story if you had cared to.

That said, I'm sorry to see this story over, and do hope you continue to pursue your PGSM Sil Mil. Keep up the good work!
AinoMinako-san
2007-11-18
ch 15,
abuseThat was an interesting ending. I really loved the short stories at the end, but I have to admit, I have no clue what they're doing there, unless to just entertain, which, if that's the case, You did an awesome job. I've been laughing my head off. Thanks so much for your story!
Haruka's Knight
2007-11-17
ch 15,
abuseI think Kurata got a raw deal compared to Minako there... B-)

The ending felt a bit... Er, I don't know how to word it. It explained a few losse ends but at the same time it left me thinking "What happened next?" and "But did things pull them apart as a couple later?"

Still, nice story... Though stalker girl probably should have turned up in jail or something.
deymian
2007-11-15
ch 15, anon.
abusedude as nice as this story is the omakes are wtf-able!XD but to bad its over now i need to find something new to read T.T... well till ure next story bye!
Vatta
2007-11-15
ch 15,
abuseI only happened across this story today and it was completed right when I was reading it. Convienient ;)
Good story. Leaves an opening for spin offs. Lol like the ones you added at the end there. I'm not sure why but the last part of the story seems rushed.

Clever when you had Rei ask if they were together in the past life or not. Given her view of it and all.

Looks like you owe Mako and Ami retribution judging by the epilogue.
Ma-kun
2007-11-13
ch 2,
abuseYay!
trusuprise
2007-11-13
ch 14,
abuseThis chapter was definitely a whirlwind of emotions, and I thought it was well done. I did find the amount of information Rei gave Matsuoka a little extraneous, but considering her mind must have been going a mile a minute in so many different directions, I don't think it was out of character, either. I was a little confused about the bit between Rei and her dad, the last scene. Was that a flashback, or did it actually happen after her moment on stage? I liked Rei's more calm and composed demeanor after having returned from Kyoto and was similarly displeased with Minako not just running up to her and saying she missed her, but then, that's Minako. And you renamed the entire story?

I have to wonder how you're going to end this. My reading comprehension isn't the best. I think this takes place after the end of PGSM and (way) before the Special Act, which would imply that Rei and Minako are going to go their seperate ways, Rei to Kyoto and Minako to continue her career. Still, I'm holding hope for a happy ending, even if it is an 'Asian' draw your own conclusions one!
Nonori
2007-11-12
ch 13,
abuseI still think PGSM is a travesty, surpassed only by the live action Negima, but I am very happy for all the new Minako/Rei fanfiction it spawned. I've been keeping up with this story, I reviewed anonymously before, but I recently got an account and decided to leave a signed review. I love your Minako, she's somewhat scheming and conniving, and I love her for it. Also, Rei totally has her wrapped around her fingers.
heatqueen
2007-11-12
ch 14,
abuseWhoa, fiancee?! OMG u gotta update fast!! Loved it as usual. :)
Haruka's Knight
2007-11-05
ch 13,
abuseStalker girl is back, I don't think I'd want to trust her in Rei's posistion... But then again it'd be hard not to, at least that a known threat vs mysterious car.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
trusuprise
2007-10-26
ch 13,
abuseSo glad to see another chapter from you!

I loved the talk between Minako and Usagi. Minako stabbing the table with the spoon was priceless. She always DID have that freaky surge of super-human power when in human form (*makes note of that thought*). And the way Usagi came to the conclusion that it wasn't a 'boyfriend' at all was really cute.

Something about the conversation between Rei and Minako didn't ring true to me. Don't know if it was the tentative image of Rei with her chin on the vanity or what it was that did it to me. And I'm interested to see how Matsuoka could possibly be offering any real help in the situation Rei's found herself in.

And a PGSM Sil Mil? I've pondered the possibility, but am still wrapping up a BSSM Sil Mil. If you've never read Kanzaki's 'Stars Fall at Dawn', a Rei/Mina PGSM Sil Mil, let me know. It's prequisite reading for any PGSM Sil Mil.
Tzarista
2007-10-26
ch 13,
abusegreat chapter
can't wait for more
heatqueen
2007-10-26
ch 13,
abuseI agree, I loved the ice cream bit. Great chappie. :)
LunarMiko07
2007-10-25
ch 13,
abuseAnother great chapter. Rei has such a decision to make...
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