This is great Dusty! You're pretty funny! I have been know to respond to 'HEY YOU' Hah ha ha You could have gottn me in trouble its 10 o' clock at night! Any way nice littl story you got there

-Hfz

I got cavitiy's from this too. You're paying for my dental bill you know? JK!

nice story ... but funny too _

hehe. I thought it was cute. I liked the parts with Charizard. I love fire types! Brock also made me laugh. Good work.

aw so cute! i love how Pikachu just automatically blasted Team Rocket away, and then gave Ash thumbs up, lol! to hell with flamers, i really enjoyed this!

cool!

Dude, dusty? sorry i just think its funny since thats my cats name, don't bother trying to hide your name, its the verb you do when you clear dust only slanged (no g).

Not a bad story, but you could of made a bit longer. But anywayz its quite good. And thanx for reviewing my story!

You were right you did open your self up to flames,oh and by the way it sucked sorry

Cute! Quite corny though...

If you wrote this story on a whim then it's understandable. Thanks btw for NOT reciting TR's motto. Brock's reaction was amusing as well. PS: Not that it'll matter to you but 'Dusty' isn't that bad a nickname.

Hello, I'm just kinda picking names at random and reading their stories...

I really liked this one so very very cute and sweet and mushy and..yeah...

Anyway, I'm from Texas, not that that matters in any way whatsoever...well...um..bye

Poor, poor Brocko... the strange thing is, a kid at my school does the same thing when he sees me... O.o; Funny. Tennessee, eh? I'm a New Yorker. Never been to Tennessee, but maybe I will one day...

HEY YOU! :-D So much sugar... :drool: Ok, no more sugar... On diet... Sugar... :drool: DOH! NUTS! Mmmm... Donuts... Sugar on donuts... :drooollll: DAMN IT!

Tennessee, huh? Well, I'm from good ol' California, and I say that this was an awesome AAMR! I even liked the part where Brock fell into the hole with Ash & Misty! Keep up the good work!