this one was good, not a bunch of meaningless crap like some stories. you did a great immitation of iroh. and zuko. and katara.

aw, that was really cute. You used the kiss so well. :] I'm glad for the way you ended it. <3

Cute. I'm no Kataanger or Zutarian, but I am inclined to Zutara. The setting was... weird. Awkward. Babymaking?

Aww, how cute. I love this sort of fluff. :3

aw sweet

Very sweet! I like the ending!

That was so funny and sweet! Hehe I loved how Zuko was freaking out after what Iroh told him but my favorite part just had to be the kiss, of course. Hehe So simple yet so sweet. Keep writing!

-Mina

...and then they made lots n lots of supercute steam babies and iroh was very proud and died a happy man many years later. :D

Wow. I liked it. Very creative. Unique.

Very funny. XD LMAO

ah... cute fluff...the kind that's best read before going to bed. ^_^

This was cute you shoudl continue the chapters, make a whole story out of it. PLEASE!

Last time I've checked, friends don't kiss each other on the lips XD Still good nonetheless lol (kidding about the kissing each other part)

oh come on...
there HAS to be a sequel!
there just HAS to be!!
PLEASE!

It was funny and really touching. Well written! Keep up the great writing!

I love this story! :P it is SO funny! yuo should try to write a longer story with more chapters. something with the whole gaang with all the new members; the duke, haru, teo and then also witk Zuko and iroh as a part of the team... i bet that haru, aang and zuko could start a nice little war about Katara, dont you? and about the "maiko-thing" then there could be a scene were the gaang meets Ty Lee and mai were Zuko breakes with mai in a proper way. I dont like that paring I am SO a zutarian but mai still deserves that zuko breakes with her in a proper way...
PS: sorry about my terrible english but im from denmark so... hope you cuold use this... bye bye!!