Good, good, good. Enjoyable; not another high school story like other typical writers. Even though it it didn't necessarily have BeyBattles, I still liked it. Suspense was what I viewed well and I like suspense. Great job.

i just loved this fic. my first beyblade fanfic actually :D only prob? no kiss yar :[

hi. haven't read fanfic for a while and I just remembered you today and i thought i'd look up your stuff :) loose lips is finished. So glad to read it, it ended so well. Keep writing. And a belated Happy new year.

Awesome chapter! I loved how you left it in a 'what if' or 'maybe' situation between Tyson and Hilary. Not making them officially a couple. It's sweet in its own way!

Great story! Too bad it had to come to an end.

Really nice way to end your story ) It was realistic - not one of those dramatic scenes where they suddenly go from friends to more within five seconds. Which is great!

And again, I'm so sad it's overrr! ( But I can understand that you're glad - I remember when I actually wrote fanfiction I used to feel guilty for not updating (which stopped pretty soon but still - it was unpleasant while it lasted P). Anyway, I hope you'll continue writing! I shall definitely continue reading if you do _

Good luck with the studying P

That's it, huh?

Good story, really.

I've been keeping track of it for some time now. Partly, because I wondered how you'd get Tyson to know about the agreement. Partly, because it was a new, a fresh idea. Not the same typical one.

I can't say I am much of a TysonHilary-Fan. More of a TyKa with slightly depressing themes such as cutting XD

But it was nice to read your story. It was cute. Not the usual romance set-up you encounter with het couples. Girl is weak, cries a lot, guy is cool and good-looking, pities her and goes after the girl. That is just... boring.

But yours wasn't. That's my point I wish there were more stories like yours out there. Less 'stereotype'. But not a whiny guy either.

Nice and sweet. Hope you write more.

I really loved this story. I've been reading it since it was first published. TyHil has always been my favorite beyblade couple. I hope to read more stories from you soon. Are you going to do a sequel to this story? It would be something that I would honestly look forward to.

This was great to read! I really enjoyed every chapter. This epilogue was just what this deserved. Haha, so they,re officially a couple? Tyson and Hilary pretty much agreed that they wouldn't mind. I loved it!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww i loved it :) you should totally do a sequel :D but with tyson's family. that would be amazing. this story was amazing all throughout. totally worth the wait :)

A perfect ending to a perfect story!

Geez, I can't stop smiling.

Love this story \(A)/

PS: Please write another TyHil soon! ('_)

haw amazing story :') best beyblade story EVER :D

i hope you write MORE :P

and i hope that your family has eased of noww :)

the end :(

oh dear... this was the best epilogue you could have written.. it's great!

wonderful last chapter for a wonderful story, you did amazing! i love it , i think i'll have to reread it again.. still no kiss in it but it wouldn't fit in it..

it's "sad" that your next story is not a TyHil one, i'm not so fond of other pairings.. but be sure that i will be part of the readers for the next TyHil, whether it is a oneshot or a long story! I'm a fan!

keep going, your stories are great!

Aaaawww! That was a cute ending that I seriously didn't see coming! I loved this, even if I wanted to hit Tyson at some parts... Then again, that could just be because I'm a violent person. XD Thanks for putting this story up!

I'm soooo happy I finally get to read the epilogue! :D

Haha, but I'm going to trty keep this short and quote-less because I'm in the middle of typing up a chapter myself, lol.

You have, of course, done an excellent job of portraying the romance and the sweetness of the moment. I have no feeling of dissatisfaction with the ending, I think you've closed it perfectly. I LOVE how you've kind of left the potential relationship just hanging in the air, almost within reach but left to the side for now.

I love the feeling of hesitancy, their tentative quick glances and silly little smiles at the end, it's perfectly and adorably awkward. But kind of a comfortable awkwardness. The kind of feeling you get when you know you're into that person, and they're probably into you too, but you love the friendship that you already have, it's kind of a 'well..what now?'

HAHA, this was totally the kind of awkward way my friendship turned relationship with my boyfriend began, and we'll have been dating for four years this January. XD

Aaaanyway, lol, kudos for creating a totally believable, natural feeling story where nothing seems forced or out of place at all. It really was a pleasure reading this. :)

Indie