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animeXIII
2009-11-24 . chapter 6
Great! Hope you post more soon it's so funny.
xXThis is HalloweenXx
2009-11-12 . chapter 6
Man, this story is funny! xDD Awesome job! I can't wait to read more!!
Mizabella
2009-10-11 . chapter 6
Aw its so friggen amazing! So... when is the next ch. coming out? LOL. Anyways, I love Roxas' dad! Its EPIC!
TheMostPatheticNameEver
2009-10-10 . chapter 6
This is freaking hilarious! I'm so looking forward to next chapter ^^ And, well, are you really going to write about twentfive more dates?
Carmen Willious Dorman
2009-09-25 . chapter 2
I freaking love your sense of humor! xD
Carmen Willious Dorman
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
OH my goodness, that was great! I was laughing the whole way through!

Note for you, however: on , you don't need to include the i /i command for italicizing words. There's a button for that. :)
Guilty.Apologies
2009-09-23 . chapter 6
Omg love it!
Update update!! :D
Amicably Apathetic
2009-06-15 . chapter 6
Omg Roxas' dad xD I LOVE this. I did not see that coming. Although it makes more sense now, with Roxas disliking his dad and his mom's comment about love in the beginning lol I also love how Roxas' first reaction was to set a tablecloth on fire xD

And don't worry, I don't mind slow updates 'cause I LOVE LOVE LOVE ZackCloud. It is one of my favorite pairings that does not get nearly enough love O: And Crisis Core is definitely amazing. I love how even at the end where they're being hunted, you can still do missions lol. I've nearly beaten too. I just need to find it @.@

I also like your end-of-chapter Axel ratings. You didn't have one last chapter though. Although that could be because Roxas was confu~sed. x3

Hmm, now I'm wondering if Axel knew about Roxas' dad. I'm not sure he did. Which just makes this even funnier.


Although the last time this was updated was... haha AkuRoku Day xD... getting close to 2 years ago? :< Oh well. Just update it eventually please. :3
reddoggie
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
i really thought that when roxas was like "Crap, will they give me a free cone since I dropped mine?" was funey! cauz all he was worried about his precious ice cream not about the fire?! tnenks for the chapp!!Q
lily-uzumaki23
2009-03-30 . chapter 6
shit. negative 20. i actually felt bad for roxas in this one. it'd kind of sad and embarrassing his dad's job. i want to assume axel had no idea...actually, i'm hoping axel had no idea just 'cause it makes it that much better for him to be forgiven than if he did know. nah, not really, roxas is gonna pwn him anyhow...poor ax!
lily-uzumaki23
2009-03-30 . chapter 5
"Of course Axel would suggest sitting somewhere where it was possible to fall over and crack your head open, spilling your brains everywhere" --this is probably the funniest line in the whole fic for me. i was laughing like my-ribs-hurt laughing. i find this story so entertaining and great. i do hope you're thinking of continuing...please? pretty please?
lily-uzumaki23
2009-03-30 . chapter 4
i'm so glad i'm reading this story right now. like, i'm going through a really hard time and it's just making me laugh so hard. i so need that at the moment. thank you so much for posting this!
lily-uzumaki23
2009-03-30 . chapter 3
i wonder if axel will make it to negative one hundred by the middle of the month. sheesh! he just seems to make everything wrong...or maybe roxas needs to be a bit more lenient. wonder what ax can pull to make it up to him lol. good chapter too!
lily-uzumaki23
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
aw. roxas is kinda mean to ax! i can't wait for them to actually start getting along. then again, i'm also enjoying this right now too much lol! good chapter :)
lily-uzumaki23
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
lol. i love your writing so much, especially your humor. that's like, what i would've been like too, like confused between leaving the ice cream behind and maybe wondering if i'd get another one at some point during the rest of the day. this is funny, good stuff, very creative, i loved the idea. keep it up!
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