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thanks for the story

beautiful. once again, you are an excellent writer. i am totally obsessed with uchihacest in any shape or form, and i love how different this story is from the usual... i love how practical and realistic it is; this could happen even when the character personalities are considered. in short, great job.

wow

i'm not an itasasu fan but that was written really well

kinda disturbing though I actually started shivering! _

O...I like it!

I'm not the hugest fan of this pairing...but its a cool story!

Striking, and very haunting. Vivid, vivid imagery, especially for such a pairing as this. In such a small dose you conveyed quite a lot of raw emotion; temptation, disgust, and shame. And of course, that pull that so many cannot deny. As always, I am left thinking about your words for some time after reading them. Captivating.

Well written. That's all I can say. Bloody well written, especially if you don't like the pairing.