I really am enjoying this story. I've read several stories about the two, but this is probably the only one that takes the point of their lives living in the Neitherworld. You should really consider continuing the story.

Hahaha Oh I simply love your story. I do hope you'll continue it

Somebody is whipped and he is not even getting any! I can't wait to see how this plays out!

BlackRose

I liked this fic, it was cute, really good! :D

aw!

it's soo sweet!

Well, if there ever was a place to drop a story, that would probably be it. Unless it's meant to be finished here- it didn't sound like it.

Anyway- this is probably my favorite BJ/Lydia fic that's closest to the cartoon canon. I like how you tied in the marriage bit from the movie to fit the cartoon. I also adore the pacing you took with their relationship- you developed it slowly and they didn't rush into it, despite their married status.

The only thing I didn't like was Vince's role in all of this. Everyone writes him as being pretty mean to Beetlejuice, but Vince is one of the few people in the Neitherworld who actually likes Beetlejuice. I can understand his antagonistic role (cuz you always need one ;] ), I just didn't think it was quite in-character.

tl;dr : I loved this story. Not enough well-written cartoonverse fics out there.

(Oh and as an aside- you mentioned not seeing all of the episodes, and I can guess that Cabin Fever was one of them. We see Beetlejuice's attic in that ep, and it's pretty wild.)

*snickers* Heh. *sing-song voice* Lydia's got him whipped:D Funny, just how I've always imagined their married life together would go...he has never really been able to say no to her, has he? *chuckles*

Really sweet, endearing story you've got here. Kudos to you for the fact that you've managed to keep all the literal transformations the cartoon so delightfully added to BJ's character. Plus, have I mentioned just how sweet this is? *gushes*

After 2 years, I know there's a pretty slim chance you'll finish this story; nevertheless, I have to try and do the "pretty please, can you update and wrap up the story? Please, please, please?" thing. So...yeah...here's hoping that such a delightful story will not be left unfinished:)

This may seem weird, but I was listening to this song while reading this chapter and it just somehow fit:

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Had to put all the spacing crap in there...

ANd just in case it still doesn't show up, look for Frollo-Your Love Will Kill Me on YouTube.

HAHAH! "Danm eyes" HAHA :D

I've always loved beetlejuice and i'm so glade that they have fanfiction on it! It is a little strange to read cuse you know it just is, but i love it just the same and this chapter so far made me laugh the hardest! :)

This is really good! I love it! :D

Aww-this is so cute! Im currently in a beetle-craze so i cant wait for this too update! Please do son!

...I gotta wonder, who's gonna point out the whole 'consumation' of the wedding thing to Lydia, weddings aren't technically binding until that point in alot of cultures and magic-wise, after all...

I feel bad for BJ in this chapter. However, at least you brought the issue of unbrushed teeth up unlike other fanfics. That's the one thing that I'm always thinking about whenever I see fanfics with Lyds and Beej kissing. Thank you for speaking Lydia's mind at the very least. XD I bet she ran because of that one simple fact. lol

I think this is the first BJ x Lyds fic that I actually like the pairing. XD A lot of the fics I see have them rushing into things but I love how this one takes its time with both their patience. I noticed you haven't updated for almost a year though and that makes me sad. ; ; I hate to beg, but will you please continue and post the next chapter soon?

I love your story. I can't wait to read more.