AWSOME! Update soon please!

Heehee ^^ I wanna cuddle Riku Ryuu

Update Update so i can know what happens please oh please don't make me wait ^-^'

What the... WFT! Was that was it naruto answering the door or something ^-^? Update asap please i need to know what happens and who was that person in that dream update soon ^-^ thanks bye

You have to finish this story i loved the first one and you have to finish this one please and thank you

Oh crap...

That was like... 5 thousand million kids.

I can't tell apart whose is whose. T_T

Umm. Honey-bunny ! -LMAO- I think you should take the scenes a little slower. Don't just randomly blurt things out like they just went, "Oh we found your brother."

It's kind of a little bit fast. o_o

Other tahn that ! GREAT story.

P.S - And the song isn't creepy. T__T

Great as always! Hope to read more soon. k? Good luck!

omg i was reading this again earlier today
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...gosh that was weird! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER ! PLZ LET TAKU BE WITH HIS FAMILY AGAIN! :]~ KEEP THIS STORY GOING !! W00T!

wow this all so good i really want to read more. UPDATE AGAIN SOON!

I really like this story! I can't wait till he meets his family!

Please,please,please,please,please,please update!

Sorry about the funeral and stuff.

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i love it so far ;) too bad i couldn't read the first version before you replaced it though -sob-

anyway, i like how you made the main character a father at 16. makes the plot more realistic in a way, you know? >:)

then again, the conflict of taku being a father, when he doesn't even know his REAL father must tear him up inside. inner conflict is always good and the song was beautiful, nice choice of words :D all of these people are in the band right? i hope so, they seem like an entertaining bunch.

and i went to your profile, and it seems there's more to taku, eh? lol i haven't read them, but they sound good, just like this one. i'll just stick to this one though, because it has MUSIC in the title

Ok...Can't wait to see the new plot n stuff!
Wishing you luck :)