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I don't know if you plan to continue this (probably not), but it is wonderful. I love how you don't quite set the scene; you trust the reader to follow along without all the details of what's going on being known.

I love how you've aged Maia and Kyle. And I am so anxious about Shawn! I hope you can relieve the anxiety with more chapters!

good read my dear. i hope you continue soon :)

Thank you for updating this. I thought it was long abandoned. This story is so well done, the bleakness, the atmosphere you've created, the familiar characters that you've aged and hardened. . . Please don't give up on this. I want to know where Shawn's been taken and why it's so terrible and where everyone else is.

holy crap, this is good. and dark. but good. I wonder of Shawn, and how he is. But your Maia and your Kyle are impeccably wonderful and make me yearn again for the show. I look forward to more, and hopefully to not waiting till 2011. ;)

This is gripping and incredibly well written. I'm going to wait and see if you finish it tho before reading any more. I've been burned too many times by being sucked into something amazing only to have it die out way before it's finished. Please keep going, I'd love to know how this ends.

This is very good so far! I had to admit I cringed when Maia was talking about what happened to babies who weren't formed correctly in Portland... Ew... Glad you used Portland as some sort of reference... Most people don't know its a city at all... Thanks for a great couple of chapters, and please update soon!

Thanks,

ZeusFluff

Woah... now I have to say, I'm very excited about this. I really can't wait to see what happens next, and what has turned the world into this... well, I suppose nightmare is the appropriate word. Don't give up on it!

This fic is stirring with possibilites; I love the tone you've set. It fits perfectly with the hints the show has given about the future.

Please update! I'm dying to know what is happening to Kyle, Shawn, Jordan, Maia.

This is so beautifully written and realized.

whoa thats like crazy good

Wow. you weren't kidding about bleak, but I'm intrigued as to how Kyle got from Promise City to his current position and how the world has changed in the last nine years.

It appears the walled city has become a reality, but who is inside?

Jordan's men? Where does he stand? The story implies Kyle and Maia would want to avoid him. Very interesting.

If you PM, please let me know about updates.

I like this so far. I'm looking forward to an update!

This is an utterly creepy and atmospheric piece.

I love all the hints you've given about what has been happening in the world. Your grown-up Maia is very intriguing, as is the quiet determination of Kyle.

I cannot wait to read more of this. This is the most interesting 4400 fic I've come across. Where is Shawn? What's happened to him?

Thanks for sharing!

This is such an atmospheric and well-conceived story and I am delighted to hear you'll be continuing it. You give enough to interest the reader without spilling the plot within the first sentence, creating tension and showing that you have a very specific concept in mind. Love it! Please write more soon.

I thought this was very well written and I'm glad that you're continuing it. At first I just assumed it would be a oneshot (seems like most 4400 fanfic is a oneshot or else doesn't get finished), but reading it, it didn't feel like that so I was thrilled to see To Be Continued at the bottom. I have to admit I sort of like angst and dark themes in fanfiction, and I don't think I've ever seen a story with this type of plot (so far in what sounds like a very unpleasant future). Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter in this (and I apologize for what I'm sure is terrible grammar because it's 2 in the morning right now).

I also wanted to say that I like you're descriptions of things and I enjoyed the older Maia. It's awful to think of her going through all of this, but I think you captured what her character would be like excellently.