It was all happy and cute and fluffy and good. Thats a lot of ands but still very true. Some words are stuffed together like edinhaled ed inhaled but other than that it was superb^^
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i was impressed.

That was an awesome story! It had wonderful fluff and realistic characters! Great job!

This is so cute! You got their personalities and dialogue down perfectly. I can totally see this happening. It's not EdWin without some adorable playful banter! :P

Aw, this was really sweet, great job! Haha, your comment at the end made me laugh XD It is a little sad that your idea of "being nice" includes giving them frost bite.

this makes me want to go ice skating...
but anyway, it was really good, not much bad grammar or anything like that.

LOVED IT! A perfect combination of an actual plot - adorable fluff - characterization - argument humor. All together a Great job!

aw! u did a great job keeping ed and winry in character...sometimes people go overboard with the love dovey ness...but u did it just right! i loved the ending...that bagreat picture to draw!!^^ Im going to go read ur other stories now...

Well, you have to be nice to characters occasionally. :P
Lovely one-shot. So sweet. It was cute, very in-character and well-written. ^_^

Kawaii! I like how they were so in charictor! (at least they seemed that way to me) great story!

This is very well written and you should be proud.

~Hwa!!~ This is amazing! It's making me feel giddy.. I love fluffs and yours is definitely great! Whe.. more EdWin fluffies! Great work! two thumbs up and an A++... this just made my day! thanks.. haha..

I loved the part when they were sitting in front of the fire.. total fluff.. :D

YAY! Tis is the first Ed/Winry story where the two are actually in character! Danke!

Well, we can't ALL be nice ALL of the time... *shifty eyes* nice story! :)

wow, that was so... romantik, ah, you know, this is the most romantik edxwin I ever read, usually I don't feel warmth when reading a fic, but I did now.