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| Darthme1011 2008-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseloved it |
| refused 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely friggin' love it! |
| Simoman 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story from start to end. Loved it! Exceptional work! Simon (aka Simoman) |
| pojoto 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely breathtaking. Utterly amazing. I don't have the vocabulary to describe how awesome that was. I hope you write a book one day because I will deifnitely buy it. |
| HeavenLee03 2007-08-18 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was really great, I dont usually read one shots but I'm glad I read this one. I loved the BP moments, so tragic and sad, the Anna parts were cute, and I think Lucas is rite, they are going to have a boy. |
| LVRofTristan 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseI'm sorry it's taken me so long to review this! I read it on the first day it was posted, but had to run out the door for something. Anyways, wonderful job! As always, your writing puts me right there in the character's shoes, and I love the vividness of your imagery. Their daughter is adorable through your description, and you make me truly envy Peyton with how sweet Lucas is. It is a shame that she couldn't regain a friendship with Brooke...But as they say, "love conquers all". Keep updating your other fics as well please! |
| kaligator 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abusei loved it. she gave her some what brookes name as her middle name. i loved the leyton. |
| IHeartOTH05 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseI must say you have a knack for these one shots!! They always ROCK!! This one was especially good. I liked the semi metaphor about the pain she felt for betraying brooke when she cut her hand on the mug!! That was good!! Keep on writin and I'll keep on readin!! SHELL |
| RSlovexLPAB 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseHey! I loved the feeling of nostalgia in this. It was bittersweet.IMO, there are little good LP writers on here but you are certainly one of them. Probably the best. You capture emotions/characters perfectly and your writing style is easy to read but not too simple. |
| leytonetreehill 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was really great! |
| jamyj30 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseloved it, cant wait to read more from you |
| SmuttBear 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseGoosebumps. So beautifully written. I always love reading your fics. I'm not sure if it's just me but I think you made a few changes to your writing style. If so I liked it but then again I like everything you write. Better stop before i sound sycophantic. |
| LeytonLover3 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Really truely loved it, it said a hell of a lot for just a oneshot. Great story. |
| RilesVaughn24 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat One-Shot I really liked it! |
| Leytonunit 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseHey i read this and i so voted for you. I also entered but my wasnt as good as your lol. Great work |