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| xManooriix 2008-07-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseI loved it !! keep it up !! Cant wait for the next update !! =D |
| lovetowritealways 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abusewow. this is pretty good. |
| Elyse 2008-06-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseOk, this was a pretty suspenseful chapter. (In the beginning, anyway) Post more! We fans love FanFiction |
| Elyse 2008-06-25 ch 7, anon. | abuseIn chapter 6, you wrote: We’re going to have to go in emergency surgery people”, the doctor yelped. However, I think it would sound more like a real hospital room if you said "We're going into surgery, ASAP. Move!" Sorry, it's just me being critical. Good job on another chapter. |
| Elyse 2008-06-25 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis was a really good chapter. How do you come up with this stuff? Anyway, gtg and read another chapter. |
| Elyse 2008-06-25 ch 5, anon. | abuseMan, this story just keeps getting better. Really, I was serious about the whole writing longer chapters sooner thing. :) |
| Elyse 2008-06-25 ch 4, anon. | abuseOk, now seriously. Just when the story is getting good, you cut us fans out. Meanie! :) |
| Elyse 2008-06-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseOk, this story is kind of starting to get good. Try and write more chapters, or longer ones. I personally know that moving is tough, but this is fun for the fans. |
| Elyse 2008-06-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseI think that this story has a very good story line. However, up until this point, all I have heard is her arguing with Landon. Sorry if I am harsh, it's just that such a good movie, and I wouold hate for it to become part of a dragging on boring plot. |
| francesfresh007 2008-06-25 ch 2, | abuseWow I love this story! The film is great and I like this storyline! francesfresh007 x |
| PiperLeoFan87 2008-06-24 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter! |
| Aswen 2008-06-24 ch 8, | abuseI think you can be forgiven for placing your education above what is esentailly a hobby! It was a great chapter! Update soon please! |
| edward-and-bella-forever 2008-06-23 ch 8, | abuseYAY YOU FINALLY UPDATE! don't worry you're forgiven as long as you keep updating! hmm landon has a sister. can't wait to see how this unfolds. |
| mardijo 2008-06-23 ch 8, | abusegood post, it will be interesting to see where you take this sister story line. post more soon |
| PiperLeoFan87 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story! |