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| Firehedgehog 2008-02-26 ch 3,  | abusesweet |
| JovianJeff 2008-02-21 ch 3, | abuseThis story is so sad, but very very good. Nice premise carried on in chapter two. Wonderful portrayal of the emotivity of the team, especially Vala. I could almost feel her disappointment, all of them really, but her most of all. Nice observation of how Daniel is everything what Drax is not, very in canon as that's what happened to the Doctor. Thank you for writing this. |
| Rory Gilmore 2008-02-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseGee whiz, I even when was working for the DAR could have assambled toys more fancier than this Timed*rk does in my spare time. Otherwise you're a poor devil lost in the middle of Hell (Light! Light!) who has no purpose in live but m*st*rb*t* with Dr. Who :P |
| JamieT19 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abuseYES, oh infinite happiness, waiting for a wonderful looking story to carry on again, and now my patience is rewarded. Wonderful chapter, i do so hope you carry on with this in the near future! |
| acer-sigma 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abuseWell it seems the team is taking things well considering Daniel is actually Drax. I seem to recall a Drax that the fourth Doctor came across during the Key to Time arc, wasn't he a renegade like the Doctor, kind of a con man or something? Anyways, can't wait to find out what Drax's plan is. |
| draconous 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abusegreat update! keep it up please I like this crossover... will he eventually meet up with the doctor? anyways keep it up and update soon please!! |
| Forge2 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abuseAh you continued this one. Isn't Drax the balding seedy fellow from the Armageddon Factor? Good work. Drax could prove a useful if untrustworthy ally against the Ori. Question: can't he feel the Doctor in his mind? |
| Harry2 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abuseNow THIS is one SNEEKY renegade! One after my own heart (or hearts you might say). Now, lets see where SG1 ended up at! |
| Dybdahl 2007-12-03 ch 2, | abuseI like it. Not as much as I like chocolatefudge, but I like it. |
| Quick-Demon 2007-10-13 ch 2, | abuseInteresting |
| dragonmisc 2007-10-02 ch 2, | abusegreat idea! keep up the good work and update soon please |
| Aussie-mel 2007-09-24 ch 2, | abuseI love this. You so have to update soon. Can't wait to see what happens. and how SG-1 react when Daniel tells them the truth. Love it. Keep up the great work. Cya Aussie Mel |
| mika 2007-09-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseooh. so Dahanyell did a Doctor? like in Human Nature when the Doctor used the Chamellion Arch to become human? brillant idea.. i wonder how well SG-1 is going to take all the revelations Dahanyell will tell them? are they going to come across the Doctor? and in which body? keep it up please |
| JovianJeff 2007-09-07 ch 2, | abuseBravo! A great beginning, full of humor, well paced and well voiced by each of the characters involved. I look forward to more of what you're going to do with this tale. |
| Glorfirien 2007-09-07 ch 2, | abuseHuh. It's definitely interesting. But how affected by the memories is he? I mean Daniel can't have been a complete fabrication and you can't just delete his experiences completely. Dahanyell? I'm surpised he's not The Historian, or something. [laughs] Man, SG-1 and everyone else is not going to be happy about this development. And what's the explanation for the Doctor not being able to sense him psychically? Great idea. |