 gginsc 6/20/11 . chapter 1Thanks for the laugh! I enjoyed this story |
 LadyConfidential 2/18/10 . chapter 1Very cute - short and sweet. Well done :) |
 Istuion 1/23/10 . chapter 1 Oh my gosh.. this is simply hilarious.
Thank you for sharing. I'm soo bookmarking this one to show others. |
 Solangedrama 12/4/09 . chapter 1I loved it.
;P |
 Ms. Scarlett Evans 8/24/09 . chapter 1Do as I say, not as I do. Yes. Quite funny. Cheers. |
 elrond peredhel 6/9/09 . chapter 1Bwahahah! The ending of this is priceless!
The whole thing is, as usual, well written, but poor confused El.. One of his finer looks I do believe! |
 WindSurfBabe 2/13/09 . chapter 1Hilarious ! Poor Elrond, though... :D
Goes straight into my Favourites. |
 link55-06 12/20/08 . chapter 1Perfect timing Elrond. Now prepare to receive lecture from CelebrÃan. I really enjoy this fic. Thanks for the laugh. |
 PurpleHat 8/2/08 . chapter 1Lovely. Very true to life. I'm sure all parents of young children will recognise this scenario - or something similar.
You manage to pack alot into a short story, and unlike so many of this length it is complete and satisfying.
Lovely finish too. Morgoth's teeth indeed! |
 T'Kath 7/12/08 . chapter 1LOL - Great! Just Great! I can see Elronds face right now with an expression I didnt know Elves could possibly show... lol!
TKath |
 All-Knowing Alien 2 6/9/08 . chapter 1Brilliant, absolutely brilliant! Very much a plausible scene - one question though - can I borrow those phrases? "Morgoth's teeth" is just too hard to resist. |
 friar jerome 9/24/07 . chapter 1thats funny |
 lady angst 8/18/07 . chapter 1I am so glad you haven't abandoned lotr like so many other authors-thank you for writing another great story. I love your sense of humor! |
 Eltara 8/16/07 . chapter 1*snicker* Oh lordy, poor Elrond, Celebrian is going to have a talk with him about that...*cough, cough* particular phrase. |
 Nieriel Raina 8/13/07 . chapter 1LOL! That was hysterical! Jay, this is just great. Perfect! *applause*
NiRi |