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| Tawg 2007-12-28 ch 1,  | abuseNice - I agree that it's past time that Zuko showed some physical signs of burning out, and him slipping into the onsen unwashed was certainly in character with his brattier side. I suppose the only thing that bugged me about this fic was your use of Japanese words and culture, when Avatar seems more Chinese-oriented (Chinese characters crop up all the time, but I can't vouch for any of the culture or dress). I suppose it's really just a mish-mash of cultures. |
| KASLiNN 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was quite good! I enjoyed the different take on Zuko's emo-ness, lol. Panic disorder, huh? Interesting. Is this going to have future chapters? I'd love to read more. Your writing style is unique--succinct, but telling and descriptive in its own way. It's a refreshing and much needed change from the flowery, bogged down purple prose I keep running head long into here on Cheers. |