What a treat! A well-rounded cast of original characters with an intriguing plot to go along with them. It's a rare thing. I look forward to reading more of Antony, Raylene, Xandra, and Co.

Yours,

ak

Ok so I went to recomend you to some friends and it occurred to me that my first review just didnt cover it, so lets try again:

Oh my God, you are so awsome. You are going on my favorite authors list and never comming off. It's not fair, why must you be such an awsome writer? My lunch break is just not long enough for it all. Write more, so much more!

I REALLY like this. It has such thorough character developement.

Do more please...pretty please?

Sorry about taking so long to review- I completely forgot you had updated! _

Ah, it's good to see more of Antony. :) I really like the way you're developing his character, and how he's slowly opening up to people. And it's also good to see that people are being less prejudiced about him, too.

Xandra I like, too. She's an interesting character, and I like the way you handled her thoughts and doubts about the whole situation with Antony. The bit about the prejudice about rich/pureblood people was a realistic touch.

I'm glad you're still working on this! :)

I've been missing out. This story is one of the best I've read with original characters. Siriusly. *May he rest in peace*

I would give constructive critism (I can't spell) but I'm not very good at that, and also, the story is really, really good. There isn't anything bad to comment on. Well, sorry if i couldn't be helpful in that respect, but I rarely am. I just tell people how good their stories are! And your's is definately good.

It's been over a year since you updated any of your stories. :(
I'm dying of the wait... (figurtively, of course.)
I hope you didn't give up on the story. Please try to update soon.
Gwendolyn C.

wow, i really like it

UPDATE! UPDATE! THIS IS THE BEST FIC EVER IN EXISTANCE! YOU MUST CONTINUE!

Who?

It's Antony, isn't it?

Or Sirius?

Or how the hell should i know with what little you've given me so I'll go to the next chapter!

I can't hate Antony either, and I want to know why! I feel SORRY for him!

And Vellian. I love Vellian. I feel really sorry for Vellian, too!

But he isn't is he? Well, you just said that Antony appeared to be the perfect Slytherin. But the way you said that lead me to assume that in one way or another he is not, which you will later reveal the reasons for.

Antony BOND. Son of Jorman Bond! No wonder! I see the connection instantly!

Merlin? Why does a woman have a man's name. How...quirky. Her parents musta been insteresting folks.

Excellent characterization. As usual.

And I think you're right on both accounts. Not as bad as R, but you should want to be safe.

More story please.

I LOVE this story! The plot is so cool, Antony's character is so well developed, and the writing sounds good. Just one more thing, add a couple more Slytherins. (don't just focus on Antony, try adding more Malfoys, Snape, and others) Oh, and I hope you'll write another chapter soon!

This story is getting so good. Never know what to expect next.

I've enjoyed reading all your fics, and I was glad to see this 6th chapter of Dux Dolosus. Your characters really seem to fit in the HP world-unlike so many fanfics, where all the characters seem to be transplanted American teenagers from 2002! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work...please continue to update!