I Love your story I cant wait for you to write more! keep up the good work!

I would love to read some more. Keep up the amazing work!

One problem here though; TVs weren't around in homes at this time only at movie theaters could you have "tvs" which had the news reports on the war and global issues. (that instead of the previews)did you mean to put radio? Because many families listened to the radio together like people watch tv together today.
Besides that it was amazing! :)

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Hey, I just thought I should review this, though I already sent you a message. ;)
Please PLEASE update this sometime soon!
I'm sure the next chapter will be great! No pressure, though! :D

its good :)

so... she´ll be gone in the next chap, right?

but what ever is gonna happen, update soon...

savvy?!

wo.. i really rather like this story..
so keep on going =]

good writing :)
I like it :)
update soon :)

This is the beginning to a very good story darling. I can always tell its going to be a good story when I can imagine myself there with the characters. As I was reading this story, I was picturing Eden sitting there on her Grampas lap hearing his story. And when she was crying on the shoulder of her brothers friends. Ive been in a situation like that, and how you described it, is how it was when I was in that situation. Bravo on an amazing story so far. I cant wait to read the rest of it :)

Band camps not geeky, or at least i don't think it is :-) ( i have never been!)love this story, background information is really interesting. but oh my god you killed off west- very sad :-(. then again that is probably going to give her the chance to go to war in his place- sneaky, i like!


hope you have a good time, hopefully hear from you next week. thanks for the review, until next time. vain

I really do like what you have written so far! Eddi seems such a conflicted character. I really like how you have taken a different approach though. Most of the others with a female charrie (including my own woo creativity XD) have just thrown the poor lassie into the battle and led no inclination on HOW she got in or why shes even there in the first place. The description is all in the right places and the dialect is fantastic too. I really really wanna know what happens next! And what happens to Weston? Does her mother push her over the edge? And even what happens to Eddi when she eventually manages to enlist? E suspense!! U gotta love it XD