oh my god!! she reminds me of me!! and you make me weak at the knee (an old flame once told me i made a terrible girl)but i didnt care back then :)oww this was too sweet i wished you made it more than just a one shot but if you did you might ruin the magic, so i guess its perfect as is :)

That was cute, aww! Looks like Walter has a crush! How cute! At least you didn't make girlycard throw them in the fire or something. Awesome work!

DuchessRaven,
How sweet--a little too much for my taste. Hey, I am not a romantic; nonetheless, this was lovely. I am a fan of GirycardXWalter. Goodness, they make up such a cute couple. (Damn!) I believed that you displayed Alucard as a girl fairly well. People tend to forget that he is male and a vmapire. Sometimes fanfics make him so girly and senstive. No, I really don't think so.
I loved his--or her-remarks. So cynical.
Ta,
Immortalis

Short and sweet. I enjoyed if and you kept them in character. Well done. :D

I LOVE all your Young Walter/ Girlycard stories, and this is no exception.
Their characterization is always so perfect. :D
And I was laughing hysterically at the mention of the laundry marker, for some reason. x3
Thank you so veryvery much for being a writer. And puttiing your stories up for us.
Please keep writing!

This was so cute... I love how you portrait Young Walter and Girlycard. You put them into situations which guarantee OOC'ness, but they never turn OOC. That's what I like more in your stories. Write more, please!

I loved this story!

Absolutely nice story ! I love the way you play with Alucard's appearance and experience about men and women...

I love the fact that GC just stands there looking bewildered.. lovely

Oh yay I love you so very much.

Nothing more to say.

SQUE! Girlycard and young walter are fabulous...and I have to agree with Walter about that stupid hat! I'm somehow thinking that the way Walter 'dreamed' about how he was going to give Alucard the flowers...wasn't just shoving it into her hands...but it worked out so nicely in his favor! It's not often you get to surprise or shock the vampire! Great fic! The little snippet views into their younger days was really fun! Thankyou!