 xShidoniiX 2008-02-06 . chapter 1LOL! this story is great! 5 stars! |
 Vampiregirl25 2008-02-03 . chapter 1*titls head with smile*now there is a-non-traditional wedding for ya! I was giggling most of the time, and it was very good. Just for good humor i think i will ask the priest at my wedding to say you may nw bit ethe birde*taps lip*yes i think i will. You are a little sketchy with the detail. What was her dress like? His sister? Him? The Cusiun? The surroundings? The limo? It was good, but just dont leave those out otherwise you will leave us confused until something comes up. Great job though! Keep it up! |
 keywordparamore 2007-12-29 . chapter 1that was weird, but thats okay, it doesnt have to be normal.
just thought i'd drop a line here...
have you heard of its like the "sister site" to and you can post poems and original stories. its really cool. |
 RavynJaganshi 2007-09-03 . chapter 1*dies from laughing* That was great! The only thing I can say is that the first few paragraphs need a bit of editing for clarity. Otherwise, this is a riot!
~Ravyn |
 Madfoot 2007-08-15 . chapter 1Great story, I had a good laugh!! (sorry I took so long to finally read it lol) |
 WildAuthor 2007-08-13 . chapter 1I have to say, that was one funny vampire wedding story. That cousin of his is pretty funny. You should write more Humor stories! One quick Q though, what did you mean "Makes fun of religion" on the warning. I did not find anything that makes fun of religion, unless you count the burning cross. :) |