i hate mary sue's so much! this fic was so funny i was laughing the whole time. Love ur writing, just that i dont like how u make gakuto so dumb, i think he's smart :)

The regulars' reactions were hilarious. You guys should read this story: s/5054384/1/Love_story_of_a_Doctor_in_the_National s. I'm sure you'd love it.

-died laughing-

Perfect! This was just perfect! God, I wanna kill this Oshima right now.

Lol...that was really awesome

LOL, thank you Haha. You should have made her part Japanese, part Chinese, part Italian, and born in AMERICA! :D

like the bit about Yuuta telling Shusuke to stop kicking Mizuki

haha that was brilliant! All OC writers should read this first. It's better than many guides out there on how to avoid making a Mary-Sue because it's witty and the interactions between the characters makes it just that bit more interesting. Lovely read!

I will to. I HATE Mary Sues. It would be much better to USE the characters that are AVAILABLE. I mean, PoT has like...100 characters or so?

lol.i hate marysues the most in fanfiction.

Marysues NFTW! (not for the win? bleah)

HOLY CRAP I DETECTED SOME RIKKAIDAI 8D

RIKKAIDAI!

NIOU!

RIKAI!

*fangirls*

Kura

going off already ... last review you'll get from me today. XD

lol I discovered a new love for Marysue parody xD

PoT seems to be littered with them...

XD She's evil. Pure. evil.

-Mary Sue In Jail-

Police: *hands over uniform* Here.

Mary Sue: Do you have anything else I can wear? This uniform makes me look non-anorexic.

that was hysterical!

it's nice! wahaha

fuji-kun, please let me help you torture her! woot!

i don't like those women...marysues are yucky.

good work here Apple Snapple! ü