ahahaha.
royal shaft-that made me laugh strangly.

Oh Roxas, stay away from those wanna be lady hookers.

Let's do the time warp again.

M, Traverse Town just took up Mardi Gras and I lyke it. Wyatt and Billy out of their minds in the graveyard? I think that I would like to write that for you.

Jesus, I really liked that one. Put it into Easy Rider and watch how good that makes it feel.

Oh man, oh man... or, woman...man...thing. *shot ded* Ahem. I love your writing, have I told you that? I love abstract stuff. I know nothing about the 50's... some of this was lost on me, but it was really...uhh... what's the word... I know there's a word. Somewhere between 'enthralling' and 'intriguing,' not quite 'enchanting' but maybe the third cousin twice removed of 'captivating.' :D Whoa, yeah, so I'ma gonna stop that... *hides*

But anyway... this just... had YOU written all over it. If that makes any sense. And anything with YOU written all over it is going to steal my heart. You can bet I'm going to be turning this one over in my mind for awhile. One of my favorite lines?

"Touched along those ten-cent water-balloons that felt a lot like mutilated sacs of goldfish innards."

HOW do you come up with something like that? Dunno. Wish I knew, but I don't, and that's (part of) what makes me love your writing so much. AND AGAIN with the hyphenated words, "white-chunk plaster" and "tar-stained nails"... I think I ranted enough about that in one of my other reviews. Still love 'em. Always will. I don't know what else to say about this, except...uhh...

YOU ROCK. :D *shot ded**again*

HAPPY AKUROKU DAY!