liked this one too

nice.

Freaking awsome! Please please please write more along this line!

Lamborghini Twins, AWAY!

XD

Why is Prowl a Jeep?

A FOREST-GREEN Jeep?

Jeep is Hound.

Prowl is Datsun, or similar type of vehicle, with police coloring.

Black and white tactician, not GREEN!

I love it please do a sequel.

Awesome little fics you have here! I love it! Is there a sequel to this story and the previous one?

Good job! D

so Magnus is on earth wonder what else you'll pull in your story

I demand a rewriten that extends 6 more chapters to effectively close this "puppy eyes"

Feel free to keep going when you get a chance in the future. This was a very interesting ride to say the least! Now go watch the movie again and please post more stories real soon )

Nearly pawns? I think you mean merely.

But otherwise? I like it. Thought it was a bit short.

how can you say the end. there has got to be more. only eight more days for TRANSFORMERS. can't wait. is there gonna be another fic soon?

Ah ending already? No its getting so good! And the fight is scaring me, must know what happens next! *sobs*

T_T muhuhuhu

well anyway... It's awesome! XD the fighting scenes, I like it!

i read the first story. it was very good. this story is awesome as well. you are doing a great job. keep it up.