I so want to hear someone say "Screw you, I'm going to Quiznos!" XD

This story totally made me go "Aw." I love Paul's reaction to Tory sneaking out. He really is so sweet.

He is also a suprisingly good fighter. Really... Honesty, I don't think Paul could of just twisted the two boys arms like that, but he would of scared them off somehow anyway. ;)

The one thing that really irks me is your "TM" on Bactine. It makes me think I'm reading a scientific study's procedure. >.< Even published novels don't use "TM", so you don't need it.

I love it. Tory crying is total win. :D

Wow, so fanfiction which doesn't involve making out DOES exist for this series; I'm glad to know that :) Quite a sweet fic

heh, cute! i love it! OOC for both of them but no one would act in character after that. its great!

I liked the story... I just need some reassurance that Tory won't have trouble with Jeremy in the future (plueze) ^_^ That was pretty bad on his part.

Aww, that was so sweet! :)