I am confused does The not the usual job connected to this one?

Very interesting. I enjoyed it.

On 17, will read the rest later, but I like it.

A completely different take!

Brilliant.

What an ending! Bravo! Bravo! :D

And to quote Nat King Cole "There may be trouble ahead..."

yeah! you finished. nice work. love the ending and you left it open a little in case you wanted to write a sequel. nice job. and yeah can't wait to see how lorne knows jack. i've always thought that would be a great crossover.

the only problem i had--which you kinda fixed by saying lorne isn't working for the sgc anymore--american military packs you and moves you--and finds you somewhere to live when they tdy you. (which is essentially what lorne is doing)...even in this case they probably would have still packed and moved the family. you also have a weight limit (sucks majorly but it happens)--dunno what it is right now but it used to be...well my brain just went blank and i can't remember what it used to be. anyway it works the way you did it, just wanted to let you know.

Ooh Jack and Evan have met before, I really can't wait for the next one. This has been one hell of a rollercoaster and thank God you've got rid of Gwen

cliffhanger! and a good one too. I can't wait for the next story.

Oh boy he's not going to be a liason to Torchwood is he? That'll cause no end of trouble

awesome chapter. i can't wait for more. ^_^

Wales, huh? Sounds interesting enough.

awesome story. i can't wait for the next chapters. ^_^

*Much banging of the head on the keyboard.* Max, Max, Max...not good, chiquita. *thinks back* At least on Atlantis, you had a support group and you were in the loop. *le sigh*

Big Uh-Oh, having been in Evan's shoes, this is not going to end well

Oh, I could go either way with this, but I lean toward the Military side. I'm not sure why, maybe in that those called to serve are called and find it hard to deny.