Where is Tomo? I have a guess but since I'm probably wrong I won't post it.

WOW IT WAS A KAORIN ASS-KICKING MOMENT! Oh this is beyond awsoeme. You turned Kaorin in a Jackie-Chan, Jet-Li, Bruce Lee, Michelle Yeoh fighting machine! Oh words can't describe how brilliant this deleted scene was. (get's on his knees and worships him) You are the master. Until then, take care...AR

AR: And how is my favorite Character.

Kaorin: You'r just being nice becauase I know Martial arts.

AR: Hee-hee -_-o

'till next time

...what? It was cool, up to the whole heart thing. Then I was just wierded out lol. Still good though.

Brilliant scene! I just love Kaorin completely destroying anybody who gets in her way! So keep up the good work and can't wait for your next fic!

Whoa, Kaorin gained superhuman strength! But she has now lost her cuteness for it, meaning that Sakaki might not like her anymore.

Wow, this ending actually made me real sad. :*( This also shows how close the Azu-Girls really are. I can see why you didn't use this alternate ending. Poor Chiyo, her soul wandering forever, cursed because of the actions she took. (sighs) Until then, take care...AR

'till next time

Well, I guess we got our wish. Good ending, but sad indeed. do think that this one fits the story a bit more, but I understand why you didn't use it. Though it really does show how close the girls are. And please, you can write a better obituary than that. Can't you?


... (lol)

Anyway, look forward to your next work!

Wow... That was really sad. I just swallowed a huge lump in my throat. It hurt >> I liked the ending used better, although this was beautifully written.

Wow...that was depressing... Not in a bad way, but it's just Chiyo being killed...that touched me. A Brilliant and sad ending... Keep up the Brilliant work!

While this ending was nice, I personally would've preferred it had you offed Chiyo-chan. You gave us that wonderful foreshadowy quote at the beginning of the previous chapter, and you didn't act on it! Sure, sure, Chiyo's soul was "reborn" or whatever, but it isn't the same. Was lookin' forward to how you were going to write it.

I demand an alternate ending chapter! >:P

Also, I'd prefer that class trip story idea instead of BoT 2. Don't get me wrong, the original was quite nice. I'd just like to see the other first.

hm..weird ending...ya Tomo and Osaka are pretty mysterious...they both got bloody noses yet they can still argue?-_- lol uhm...I dunno both seem interesting!uhm...super-fic!no..battle of thermopylaye!grr...I dunno!:S

This was a beutiful ending, I liked what the Azu-Girls did for little Chiyo-chan. (Gives Jay an evil glare) Who I am glad wasn't killed. (goes back to his happy face) Anywho. I would like to see the around the world trip. It would be fun to see what situations the Azu-girls will get into. Once again, another great fic, another happy ending. So until then, take care...AR

'till next time

Good end to a god fic, though I'd have liked to know what ended up happening to the Mihamas after this. Did everything turn out alright?

As for your next fic, do the sequel to the Battle of Thermopylae. Theres still some blank areas I have about the first too. I never really got that whole naval battle thing. Was it ship vs ship? or was it ship vs space cruiser? Also, I wanna know who the alien dudes are too, that was never really fleshed out.

Again, if I missed anything, then let me know. It was one of the first few Azumanga Daoih fics I read. Also, I like that kind of story, like puting the girls in odd situations.

Lastly, good thing you have a soft spot for Chiyo. Though, I would love to see the day when someone can actually write her death appropritately. That would be something.

Hmm... If i had to choose one... it would be... Your un-named "Super-Fic". Well they both sound great, but i love new stories over sequels, but it's your decision in the end, and it's gonna be brilliant either way!

It's not fair for poor Chiyo-chan to go through such guilt. She is only a little girl...A LITTLE GIRL! I HOPE YOUR HAPPY PUTTING HER THROUGH THAT! AND ONE MORE THING, UNTIL THEN, TAKE CARE!

Kaorin: (walking up with a small trophy) The Azumanga Review society would like to award you with the award for the most overacting ever done on a review. (she hands him the trophy)

'till next time -_-o